Morning's Releasing

Into the wind
the heart speaks
the words
that stay hidden
from all others.
Joining with them
the heart spent
words spoken by
sisters and brothers.

The leaves of the trees
seem to gather, 
with ease,
every heart-spent phrase.
Waving them each
to the heavens
in turn
then releasing
them in the breeze.

©Debra Squyres 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 7:11 AM
- Debra, I "jump in" at your poem to wish you a HAPPY NEW YEAR! - Hope all is well with you !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Makama Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 8:20 AM
This is splendid and beautiful. Good write friend and keep the fire burning. its really nice coming across such a piece in a lovely day like this. Cheers! Funom Makama.
Johnson Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 4:48 PM
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Carroll Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 6:15 AM
Hi Debra, A refreshing write to read today.. Ken
Johnson Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 4:09 PM
The breeze in the trees seem to whisper Louise. :) The language of nature speaks in spiritual tounge. A new born heart will always feel young. And the heavens will open to shine down it's light. Each morning when God's hand make's everything right. So good to hear from you again Debra. Hope the vacation was all you needed it to be. Peace. :)
Phillips Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 2:33 PM
Nice contrast used in this poem. The wind, the heart and the trees. Nice work.
Sivey Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 12:23 PM
I really enjoyed how you brought in the power of the trees within this write, the natural scene within your poem is extraordinary my friend! I truly loved reading this lovely piece this afternoon! What a powerful poemm your have written here, Debra! Great Work!!
Tacito Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 8:50 AM
An adjoining of peace, serenity, & appreciation for the new day life gifts to us. This was wonderful!
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