Morning Walk Collab

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Walking slow on a forest path Gentles the soul with still repose Beneath shadows of the sun’s wrath Breathing wonders beyond meadows Destined to silence, so pleasing Erasing the dark with dawn’s dew Kissing away the doubt, easing Sorrows and worries, fetching new Mercies each morning, heart dances Birds sing in harmony, enjoy Their chorus of nature's glances Troubles fade as trees nod with joy Sauntering along with the breeze Sunrays pouring into the core As day breaks, woody smells do please Empowering musings galore. First two stanzas by Regina and Second two stanzas by Joanna Daniel Collaborate With Me Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joanna Daniel Theme: Nature Syllable Count: 8 syllables Rhyme scheme: abab March 24, 2023

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Daniel Turner

Date: 3/30/2023 8:42:00 AM

Congratulations Gina on your winning write. I really liked this one the best. A gorgeous poem.

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/30/2023 7:57:00 AM

Wow! Gina, You and Jo penned a good collab. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/30/2023 7:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Gina! :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/30/2023 6:23:00 AM

This one touched my heart, Gina, fun writing along with you, congratulations:)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/26/2023 7:37:00 AM

The peace and tranquility of the forest are captured beautifully here, Gina... This poem was such a delight to read this morning... Really well done! My best wishes for the contest!