Morning Wait

the hour is past, the sky 
overcast and the chill feels heavier 
on a drooping shoulder 

ships have come, 
and gone like the last biscotti 
for the little one, 
she worries 
her hand 

maybe they should just go 
home where there might still be 
some warmth left in the 
morning’s espresso 

she never thought she would have 
to look for warmth, she had always 
had the rush of heat 
from his arms 

somehow the cobbled walk seems 
much longer, harder than when 
they set out at dawn 

maybe tomorrow morning 
the quay will be less cold, 
and the sky a little brightened
with his return 



After:  Morning at the Quay in Venice by Helen Allingham

For Debbie Guzzi's Challenge: Ten Pictures, Ten Poems, Ten Days - Painting 9
Kim Patrice Nunez
15 January 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sage Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 7:32 PM
excellent write Kim, awesome...
Beaufort Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 11:10 AM
Tough feelings for those who can only watch and wait.
Legend Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 6:36 AM
very interesting....nd creative.
A  Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Kim, you are a wonderful poet.... Wonderful painted picture.... SKAT
Onclaud Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 12:50 PM
well, you are a chart-topper and definitely unstoppable!... how poignant, kim... did you mean 'brightened'...congrats on this featured poem.. GO!..huggs
Nunez Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 8:54 PM
Thanks again, Nettie. Hope the muse will always be here... About that one word, yes, and will revise accordingly...luv ya...huggs!
Muideen Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 7:37 AM
Much enjoyable Kim. Even-though without the post of pic, it depicts image that bring your write to life in sense of the reader..........A.M.
Sage Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 5:44 AM
excellent write Kim, mind blowing
May Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 8:21 PM
Congrats on your poem winning in painting #9 Kim...nicely done
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 5:44 PM
this is very lovely, Kim. About putting picture image, are you going to the icon for images first? That is the only way I can get them to post!
Turner Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 5:16 PM
Looks to me as if you painted the picture with your words.I know that painting.Well done.
Allison Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 4:40 PM
You are taking this challenge by storm Kim fabulous write with such powerful imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
Gulley Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 4:34 PM
A beautiful write Kim, I felt the emotion and absence in this write. Thanks or sharing....Sharon
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