Morning Unfolding

I step outside and enter into morning
just before the sun,
the first petals of new blossoms are forming,
sunrise has begun.

A quiet, furtive breeze bends flower stems
a rustles fragile leaves, 
soon several rays of sunlight descend 
through frigid, dew-soaked trees.

Sun continues rising and darkness retreats
to surface shadows,
sleepy flower faces and droopy limbs reach
for warmth to swallow.

I sigh, and tepid air pours 
into my lungs, it is refreshing,
the smell of maple and pine
among this fragrant meshing!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Crystal Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 10:10 AM
Beautiful poem! The imagery is unreal! Thank you for a beautiful morning from cold and snowy Colorado. Left me with the warmth of spring.
Leffanta Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 11:21 AM
You certainly have a way with words! Aloha! Rico
Krutsinger Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 5:04 PM
Refreshing and uplifting!
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