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Morning Unfolding

I step outside and enter into morning just before the sun, the first petals of new blossoms are forming, sunrise has begun. A quiet, furtive breeze bends flower stems a rustles fragile leaves, soon several rays of sunlight descend through frigid, dew-soaked trees. Sun continues rising and darkness retreats to surface shadows, sleepy flower faces and droopy limbs reach for warmth to swallow. I sigh, and tepid air pours into my lungs, it is refreshing, the smell of maple and pine among this fragrant meshing!

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Date: 2/26/2021 10:10:00 AM
Beautiful poem! The imagery is unreal! Thank you for a beautiful morning from cold and snowy Colorado. Left me with the warmth of spring.
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Date: 1/11/2021 11:21:00 AM
You certainly have a way with words! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/10/2021 5:04:00 PM
Refreshing and uplifting!
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