Morning Sunshine

our hands are interlocked like threads in a soft cotton shirt

such an easy feeling of bliss

the polariod picture forever saved in my mind

the sun shining ever so cautiously through the curtains not to disturb the moment

your hair radiates a beautiful dark amber a color for the heavens

thoughts of complete satisfaction and happiness run rampant in my head

can we lay here together forever keeping the truest emotion in our hearts?

love

if not

we can revisit the moment for it is a new journey we found together

it can not be taken away from us because it is embodied in me...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/19/2011 5:33:00 AM
I enjoy reading your excellent poetry this morning Rob. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2011 1:47:00 PM
super romantic piece Rob.. great imagery and expression in your lines.. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 5/18/2011 12:22:00 PM
Rob-This is the first poem I have read of yours I believe. First of all, the format is unique and captivates the audience. I think I would just melt if my dear spouse would ever feel this enthralled by a single moment with me. Don't ever ever ever enter this poem in a contest. It is absolutely amazing and should not be compared to anything! My daughter loves this one too. Fabric fibers? Really awesome! Gwendolen Gwendolen
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