Morning Star

Sunlight lives in you.
Awakened by a dawning love,
your eyes shine gold.
When peaceful night turns to morn, 
the stars dream on your shoulders.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Comporozos Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 2:03 PM
Sweet and tender,runs smoothly over love nad down into the heart. I'm a lover of tankas and haikus
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June 29, 2012 at 8:42 AM
Very nice poem...enjoyed...thanks for the nice comments on my poem...Marty
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June 28, 2012 at 8:44 PM
enjoyed reading your lovely poetic dream!
Haick Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 8:39 PM
A lovely Tanka for The Morning Star, Rhonda...beautiful. Love, Annalise
Merryman Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 8:11 PM
A very lovely tanka, Rhonda! The imagery is magical. Love, Kim
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June 28, 2012 at 4:43 PM
This write is truly one of the greatest poems I've ever read! It struck a perfect chord within me and left me in complete awe! As Gail so illustriously said, it is breathtaking! Thank you for writing this incredible poem! Excellent Work!!
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