Morning Star

Sunlight lives in you. Awakened by a dawning love, your eyes shine gold. When peaceful night turns to morn, the stars dream on your shoulders.

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Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 6/30/2012 2:03:00 PM

Sweet and tender,runs smoothly over love nad down into the heart. I'm a lover of tankas and haikus

Marty Owens

Date: 6/29/2012 8:42:00 AM

Very nice poem...enjoyed...thanks for the nice comments on my poem...Marty

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/28/2012 8:44:00 PM

enjoyed reading your lovely poetic dream!

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/28/2012 8:39:00 PM

A lovely Tanka for The Morning Star, Rhonda...beautiful. Love, Annalise

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/28/2012 8:11:00 PM

A very lovely tanka, Rhonda! The imagery is magical. Love, Kim

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/28/2012 4:43:00 PM

This write is truly one of the greatest poems I've ever read! It struck a perfect chord within me and left me in complete awe! As Gail so illustriously said, it is breathtaking! Thank you for writing this incredible poem! Excellent Work!!