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Morning Star

Sunlight lives in you. Awakened by a dawning love, your eyes shine gold. When peaceful night turns to morn, the stars dream on your shoulders.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/30/2012 2:03:00 PM
Sweet and tender,runs smoothly over love nad down into the heart. I'm a lover of tankas and haikus
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Date: 6/29/2012 8:42:00 AM
Very nice poem...enjoyed...thanks for the nice comments on my poem...Marty
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Date: 6/28/2012 8:44:00 PM
enjoyed reading your lovely poetic dream!
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Date: 6/28/2012 8:39:00 PM
A lovely Tanka for The Morning Star, Rhonda...beautiful. Love, Annalise
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Date: 6/28/2012 8:11:00 PM
A very lovely tanka, Rhonda! The imagery is magical. Love, Kim
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Date: 6/28/2012 4:43:00 PM
This write is truly one of the greatest poems I've ever read! It struck a perfect chord within me and left me in complete awe! As Gail so illustriously said, it is breathtaking! Thank you for writing this incredible poem! Excellent Work!!
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