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Morning Star

Idyllic
Tranquil aura,

Mystique
Glinting romance,

Allure of beauty
And glamour,

Lauded
Verse of love,

Smiling
Tease of dawn,

Charmingly
You illuminate
Flame of my fervid heart;

My
Flirting Morning Star.

June 3, 2020
Placed 2nd: Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 – Yalto 2 – Poetry Contest
Lines 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
HM: Brian's Select Seven Contest

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Valsa George Date: 1/1/2022 8:04:00 PM I am lost for a moment in the scintillating beauty of your morning star. Lovely penning Vijay ! Login to Reply

Funom Makama Date: 6/8/2020 8:38:00 PM Who will not blush till their spirits dash out into the moon if these words are expressed to them? Reading it already oils my dry skin with sensual vaseline. Great write and a big congratulations to you for your high placement. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/9/2020 9:37:00 AM Thank you Funom--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/8/2020 6:00:00 PM I am back to congratulate you on your wonderful second placement Vijay! I especially love the way you ended this! xxoo Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/9/2020 9:36:00 AM Thank you Connie--much appreciate.

Sam Kauffman Date: 6/8/2020 1:55:00 PM "Tease of dawn," "flirting morning star," such playful references to the Morning Star, Vijay. Congratulations on your winning placement! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/8/2020 2:30:00 PM Thank you Sam--much appreciate.

Aditi Mishra Date: 6/8/2020 7:23:00 AM Back to congratulate you on your win Vijay :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/8/2020 12:23:00 PM Much appreciate Aditi--many thanks.

Sandra Adams Date: 6/7/2020 8:40:00 PM beautifully penned Vijay...I am way behind on reading, even further behind on writing... wonderful write, congratulations on your well deserved win :) hugs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/8/2020 12:23:00 PM Thank you my friend--glad you are back--much appreciate.

Arturo Michael Date: 6/7/2020 7:46:00 PM If you have an extra Star I can borrow...please send it my way...Nice one Vijay Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/8/2020 12:22:00 PM Sure, why not my friend. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/7/2020 2:53:00 PM this one is very cute and could maybe be a person as well as a star!! Congrats on the win! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/8/2020 12:21:00 PM Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/7/2020 1:58:00 PM - Congratulations on your well deserved 2nd place in the Yalto contest, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/8/2020 12:21:00 PM Thank you Anne-Lise --much appreciate.

Edward Ibeh Date: 6/7/2020 6:30:00 AM A fascinating Yalto, Vijay:-) Congratulations on your podium finish! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/8/2020 12:21:00 PM Thank you Edward--much appreciate.

Michelle Faulkner Date: 6/6/2020 11:20:00 AM 'Mystique/glinting romance' my favorite lines, weaves a charming spell- Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/6/2020 2:26:00 PM Thank you Michelle--much appreciate.

Silent One Date: 6/6/2020 9:07:00 AM Sounds beautiful...Nice choice of words to create romantic imagery.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/6/2020 2:25:00 PM Thank you, SO--much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy Date: 6/6/2020 7:12:00 AM Vividly descriptive and moving, Vijay, Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/6/2020 7:14:00 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Aditi Mishra Date: 6/4/2020 1:47:00 PM Your beautiful imagery is outstanding Vijay! I love the flame of my fervid heart. Lovely verse. Best wishes for the contest :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/5/2020 7:15:00 AM Much appreciate Aditi, your kind remarks--many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/4/2020 3:52:00 AM Ahh Vijay, your words soothe like a summer breeze. You have mastered this form to perfection! I know I will see this in lights! Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/4/2020 10:47:00 AM That is so kind of you Connie--appreciate the vote of confidence--many many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 6/4/2020 3:37:00 AM An enchanting beauty, unique verses.. only an eloquent mind and a sensitive artistic heart would offer such a delightful treat to avid readers! Great poetry, dear Vijay! My deepest regards and blessings. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/4/2020 10:47:00 AM Always a treat to read your comments--much appreciate, Besma--many thanks.

Lawrence Sharp Date: 6/4/2020 2:07:00 AM Fantastic ! Very sparsely worded; the restraint and odd patience combine to deliver a real gem. Fave. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/4/2020 10:46:00 AM Much appreciate my friend--so glad you liked it. Many thanks, Lawrence.

Brandy Nicole Date: 6/3/2020 11:05:00 PM Beautiful in every way. Your thoughts caress the page with elegance and grace. Bringing a smile to my face. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/4/2020 10:44:00 AM So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.

Tom Cunningham Date: 6/3/2020 8:22:00 PM Often seen it when I got up at the dead man's hour (04.00) a tease of dawn, perfect discription Vijay. Good luck Tom Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/4/2020 10:43:00 AM So glad you liked it Tom--much appreciate--many thanks.

Judy Ball Date: 6/3/2020 8:13:00 PM Lovely Vijay. The thing that inspires the poet. Great job. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/4/2020 10:43:00 AM Much appreciate, Judy--many thanks.