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Morning Star

Idyllic Tranquil aura, Mystique Glinting romance, Allure of beauty And glamour, Lauded Verse of love, Smiling Tease of dawn, Charmingly You illuminate Flame of my fervid heart; My Flirting Morning Star. June 3, 2020 Placed 2nd: Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 – Yalto 2 – Poetry Contest Lines 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 Sponsor: Edward Ibeh HM: Brian's Select Seven Contest

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Valsa George

Date: 1/1/2022 8:04:00 PM

I am lost for a moment in the scintillating beauty of your morning star. Lovely penning Vijay !

Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2020 8:38:00 PM

Who will not blush till their spirits dash out into the moon if these words are expressed to them? Reading it already oils my dry skin with sensual vaseline. Great write and a big congratulations to you for your high placement.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/9/2020 9:37:00 AM

Thank you Funom--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/8/2020 6:00:00 PM

I am back to congratulate you on your wonderful second placement Vijay! I especially love the way you ended this! xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/9/2020 9:36:00 AM

Thank you Connie--much appreciate.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/8/2020 1:55:00 PM

"Tease of dawn," "flirting morning star," such playful references to the Morning Star, Vijay. Congratulations on your winning placement!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2020 2:30:00 PM

Thank you Sam--much appreciate.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/8/2020 7:23:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your win Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2020 12:23:00 PM

Much appreciate Aditi--many thanks.

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/7/2020 8:40:00 PM

beautifully penned Vijay...I am way behind on reading, even further behind on writing... wonderful write, congratulations on your well deserved win :) hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2020 12:23:00 PM

Thank you my friend--glad you are back--much appreciate.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/7/2020 7:46:00 PM

If you have an extra Star I can borrow...please send it my way...Nice one Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2020 12:22:00 PM

Sure, why not my friend. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2020 2:53:00 PM

this one is very cute and could maybe be a person as well as a star!! Congrats on the win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2020 12:21:00 PM

Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2020 1:58:00 PM

- Congratulations on your well deserved 2nd place in the Yalto contest, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2020 12:21:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise --much appreciate.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/7/2020 6:30:00 AM

A fascinating Yalto, Vijay:-) Congratulations on your podium finish!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2020 12:21:00 PM

Thank you Edward--much appreciate.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/6/2020 11:20:00 AM

'Mystique/glinting romance' my favorite lines, weaves a charming spell-

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2020 2:26:00 PM

Thank you Michelle--much appreciate.

Silent One

Date: 6/6/2020 9:07:00 AM

Sounds beautiful...Nice choice of words to create romantic imagery..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2020 2:25:00 PM

Thank you, SO--much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/6/2020 7:12:00 AM

Vividly descriptive and moving, Vijay, Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2020 7:14:00 AM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/4/2020 1:47:00 PM

Your beautiful imagery is outstanding Vijay! I love the flame of my fervid heart. Lovely verse. Best wishes for the contest :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/5/2020 7:15:00 AM

Much appreciate Aditi, your kind remarks--many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/4/2020 3:52:00 AM

Ahh Vijay, your words soothe like a summer breeze. You have mastered this form to perfection! I know I will see this in lights! Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/4/2020 10:47:00 AM

That is so kind of you Connie--appreciate the vote of confidence--many many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/4/2020 3:37:00 AM

An enchanting beauty, unique verses.. only an eloquent mind and a sensitive artistic heart would offer such a delightful treat to avid readers! Great poetry, dear Vijay! My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/4/2020 10:47:00 AM

Always a treat to read your comments--much appreciate, Besma--many thanks.