Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Morning Star

Idyllic
Tranquil aura,

Mystique
Glinting romance,

Allure of beauty
And glamour,

Lauded
Verse of love,

Smiling
Tease of dawn,

Charmingly
You illuminate
Flame of my fervid heart;

My
Flirting Morning Star.

June 3, 2020
Placed 2nd: Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 – Yalto 2 – Poetry Contest
Lines 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
HM: Brian's Select Seven Contest

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Valsa George January 1, 2022 at 8:04 PM I am lost for a moment in the scintillating beauty of your morning star. Lovely penning Vijay !

Funom Makama June 8, 2020 at 8:38 PM Who will not blush till their spirits dash out into the moon if these words are expressed to them? Reading it already oils my dry skin with sensual vaseline. Great write and a big congratulations to you for your high placement. Vijay Pandit June 9, 2020 at 9:37 AM Thank you Funom--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong June 8, 2020 at 6:00 PM I am back to congratulate you on your wonderful second placement Vijay! I especially love the way you ended this! xxoo Vijay Pandit June 9, 2020 at 9:36 AM Thank you Connie--much appreciate.

Sam Kauffman June 8, 2020 at 1:55 PM "Tease of dawn," "flirting morning star," such playful references to the Morning Star, Vijay. Congratulations on your winning placement! Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 2:30 PM Thank you Sam--much appreciate.

Aditi Mishra June 8, 2020 at 7:23 AM Back to congratulate you on your win Vijay :) Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 12:23 PM Much appreciate Aditi--many thanks.

Sandra Adams June 7, 2020 at 8:40 PM beautifully penned Vijay...I am way behind on reading, even further behind on writing... wonderful write, congratulations on your well deserved win :) hugs Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 12:23 PM Thank you my friend--glad you are back--much appreciate.

Arturo Michael June 7, 2020 at 7:46 PM If you have an extra Star I can borrow...please send it my way...Nice one Vijay Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 12:22 PM Sure, why not my friend. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2020 at 2:53 PM this one is very cute and could maybe be a person as well as a star!! Congrats on the win! Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 12:21 PM Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2020 at 1:58 PM - Congratulations on your well deserved 2nd place in the Yalto contest, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 12:21 PM Thank you Anne-Lise --much appreciate.

Edward Ibeh June 7, 2020 at 6:30 AM A fascinating Yalto, Vijay:-) Congratulations on your podium finish! Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 12:21 PM Thank you Edward--much appreciate.

Michelle Faulkner June 6, 2020 at 11:20 AM 'Mystique/glinting romance' my favorite lines, weaves a charming spell- Vijay Pandit June 6, 2020 at 2:26 PM Thank you Michelle--much appreciate.

Silent One June 6, 2020 at 9:07 AM Sounds beautiful...Nice choice of words to create romantic imagery.. Vijay Pandit June 6, 2020 at 2:25 PM Thank you, SO--much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy June 6, 2020 at 7:12 AM Vividly descriptive and moving, Vijay, Janice Vijay Pandit June 6, 2020 at 7:14 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Aditi Mishra June 4, 2020 at 1:47 PM Your beautiful imagery is outstanding Vijay! I love the flame of my fervid heart. Lovely verse. Best wishes for the contest :) Vijay Pandit June 5, 2020 at 7:15 AM Much appreciate Aditi, your kind remarks--many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong June 4, 2020 at 3:52 AM Ahh Vijay, your words soothe like a summer breeze. You have mastered this form to perfection! I know I will see this in lights! Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit June 4, 2020 at 10:47 AM That is so kind of you Connie--appreciate the vote of confidence--many many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri June 4, 2020 at 3:37 AM An enchanting beauty, unique verses.. only an eloquent mind and a sensitive artistic heart would offer such a delightful treat to avid readers! Great poetry, dear Vijay! My deepest regards and blessings. Vijay Pandit June 4, 2020 at 10:47 AM Always a treat to read your comments--much appreciate, Besma--many thanks.

Lawrence Sharp June 4, 2020 at 2:07 AM Fantastic ! Very sparsely worded; the restraint and odd patience combine to deliver a real gem. Fave. Vijay Pandit June 4, 2020 at 10:46 AM Much appreciate my friend--so glad you liked it. Many thanks, Lawrence.

Brandy Nicole June 3, 2020 at 11:05 PM Beautiful in every way. Your thoughts caress the page with elegance and grace. Bringing a smile to my face. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit June 4, 2020 at 10:44 AM So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.

Tom Cunningham June 3, 2020 at 8:22 PM Often seen it when I got up at the dead man's hour (04.00) a tease of dawn, perfect discription Vijay. Good luck Tom Vijay Pandit June 4, 2020 at 10:43 AM So glad you liked it Tom--much appreciate--many thanks.

Judy Ball June 3, 2020 at 8:13 PM Lovely Vijay. The thing that inspires the poet. Great job. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit June 4, 2020 at 10:43 AM Much appreciate, Judy--many thanks.