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Morning Star

Eternal

             star bursts through night
                    
                      S-H-I-N-I-N-G

the rooster crows
no more denying
                             the King’s crown,

                     scepter —

                                 A-R-I-S-I-N-G

        the hope
         of glory

Son-rise song
     of Edenic choir
                    seraphic rejoicing



                                        squelched —
                                                 blackout ceasing


6/1/2020
Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 - Yalto 2 - Poetry Contest
Sponsor Edward Ibeh

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Date: 6/8/2020 3:30:00 PM
Glorious images, Kim! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/8/2020 8:08:00 AM
This is a beautiful write Kim! Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/7/2020 3:07:00 PM
Back with my congrats for you, Kim. Hope you are being inspired some more by your muse!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2020 7:55:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Date: 6/7/2020 2:00:00 PM
- A great and creative 3rd place ... congratulations so much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2020 7:55:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 6/7/2020 7:16:00 AM
A wonderful, expertly-crafted Yalto, Kim:-) Congratulations on your podium finish!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2020 7:54:00 PM
Thank you, Edward!
Date: 6/7/2020 3:01:00 AM
Terrific, best wishes in contest. A stunning pen! Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2020 5:44:00 AM
Thank you, Panagiota! <3
Date: 6/3/2020 8:31:00 AM
Well crafted dear Kimmy...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2020 5:51:00 PM
Thank you, kind poet!
Date: 6/3/2020 12:39:00 AM
I feel I should try something of this sort one day!! Wonderful pattern and write!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2020 5:51:00 PM
You should!
Date: 6/2/2020 2:05:00 AM
I am not sure which to be more fascinated with - your words or your cadence or your typing prowess. I will just say "wow" Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2020 4:21:00 PM
You’re so sweet, Ms. Faerie Queen! <3
Date: 6/1/2020 7:40:00 PM
Very cool!! Gosh, I should experiment like you do with that clever patterning!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2020 7:56:00 PM
Thanks so much! :)
Date: 6/1/2020 8:50:00 AM
I enjoyed this, Kim. Hope you're a winner. Much love and prayers for you, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2020 6:18:00 PM
Thanks, Regina!
Date: 6/1/2020 8:21:00 AM
Lovely write, Kim--beautifully rendered.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2020 8:30:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!

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