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Phosphorus ~ great and unique Twinkle .. ~ glowing jewel ~ Twinkle little star ... lightbearer ~ from God The brightest ... Glowing, glorious and pretty ~ in the new morning the big star of them all ... I ~ always admire it 26 - 05 - 2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Yalto 2 - Poetry Contest Line 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 5th place in the contest

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Date: 6/8/2020 8:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your high score, this is a lovely piece. Creativity at its best.
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Date: 6/8/2020 3:42:00 PM
Early in the morning seeing this morning star is like seeing hope for the new day. It always brings a smile to me. "Light bearer of God" stands out as words to ponder. Congratulations, with a smile, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 6/8/2020 8:20:00 AM
Phosphorus glowing jewel..so creative and witty Anne. Glad I got to read your beautiful words. Congratulations on your win :) Blessings and love
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:51:00 PM
- Many thanks Aditi, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/7/2020 7:39:00 PM
A lovely yalto with a spiritual touch. Nice starter word - Phosphorus. I applaud your talent, congratulations!
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:50:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, R.A.P. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/7/2020 3:16:00 PM
so sweet, Sunshine. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:50:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/7/2020 7:34:00 AM
Amazing poem and imagery, Anne-Lise:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest! *After a few rereads, I realize I should've placed this higher. My apologies.*
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:08:00 PM
- Many thanks for my place on your winning list, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/3/2020 7:58:00 AM
So dainty poem. Very heart-warming. Keep coming.
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:48:00 PM
- Many thanks, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/2/2020 9:33:00 PM
Awesome poem. Love to star gaze. love phyl
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:47:00 PM
Many thanks for your valuable comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/31/2020 9:29:00 AM
A fitting poetic tribute to this star which many do not even bother to look at twice, yet you give it light and beauty, Anne-Lise! Have a lovely day. Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:47:00 PM
- Many thanks, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/29/2020 11:04:00 PM
Brilliant! A lovely poem, Anne-Lise. :)
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:47:00 PM
Many thanks for your valuable comments, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/29/2020 8:56:00 AM
Nice little yalto, Anne-lise:) hope all is well with you:)
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:46:00 PM
- Many thanks, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/27/2020 1:01:00 PM
Oh so beautiful. Very nice! I hope all is well :)
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:46:00 PM
- Many thanks, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/27/2020 1:45:00 AM
I think Noway inspires you a great deal my friend - your poems have a soft passionate sensitve fragility about them which depict awesome nature scenes and wonderful skies at night - but of course it your poetic talent my Norwegian soul sister that is able to paint this on a poetic canvas. Love and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:45:00 PM
- Many thanks for your valuable comments, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/26/2020 2:19:00 PM
your imagery is so beautiful, a joy to read Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:45:00 PM
- Many thanks for your valuable comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/26/2020 1:42:00 PM
An amazing sight to see, It's amazing through a telescope, it has phases like the moon and when I saw it it was a quarter crescent, its not a very hospitable planet though. Hope you're well Anne. Tom
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:11:00 PM
- Many thanks, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/26/2020 1:17:00 PM
Venus, the morning star, is always the brightest star in the early dawn. Lovely write, Anne Lise. Hugs
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:11:00 PM
- Many thanks, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/26/2020 12:57:00 PM
Lovely ode to the morning star--a charming write, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:10:00 PM
- Many thanks, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/26/2020 12:48:00 PM
Wonderful write Anne, best wishes
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:09:00 PM
- Many thanks, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)