the following poem written in response to above image--for online poetry class
She sits, blossoms gathered around her~ colors curl close like childhood comfort, Petals brush her skin with borrowed brightness~ their faint fragrance carries echoes of earlier days. Old hopes stir beneath her settled years~ small sweetness opens inside her.
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