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Morning Mist

The mist swirls through the deep vale shifting slowly and giving glimpses of the lush vegetation and flowers. Slowly it dissipates in dawn's sunlight. Teasing as it lazily drifts showing for a brief second a colourful bank rife with flowers. Then blankets it from sight. As the day warms up it appears to thicken then yield oh so slowly. Wisps of mist now fading. Before our eyes lies startling beauty. Nature's riches displayed a wealth of orange and yellow. Pinks, purples and blues vie each more beautiful and lavish green trees gently shade the saplings. The Treasure of Nature's Canvas is now stretched out before us while the birds happily sing as they rush to build their nests. Insects buzz with joy as they collect the pollen and nectar from flowers. In this new spring day life itself is reaffirmed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/12/2015 6:39:00 PM
Hi Shadow, I like the dawn and have written a poem about it which I will post soon. It's a very wide and varied topic and eternal in its life. I do like however the line The Treasure of Natures Canvas which every dawn is and always reminds me of the Creator. Eddie
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Date: 6/17/2015 4:27:00 AM
ty Eddie hugs
Date: 4/25/2015 6:50:00 AM
Wonderful poem stretched with vivid images.. :) Pretty!~ Olive eloisa
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Date: 4/26/2015 5:18:00 PM
ty Olive hugs
Date: 4/24/2015 2:29:00 PM
A very tantilizing spring work..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for dropping by..I hope that this has been a great spring day for you..Sara
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Date: 4/26/2015 5:18:00 PM
ty Sara yes it was lovely day hugs
Date: 4/21/2015 10:33:00 AM
I love your description of," Nature's Canvas is now stretched out " a 7 and fav. Blessings Eve
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/23/2015 4:38:00 PM
ty Eve so nice of you hugs
Date: 4/18/2015 9:24:00 AM
So beautiful, Shadow. Did you awaken one day this week and find this mysterious mist teasing your eyes, finally to unveil this wealth of beauty? This poem makes me want to see this same sight.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/18/2015 4:16:00 PM
It is imagination Andrea drawn from many early morning mists ty hugs
Date: 4/18/2015 8:00:00 AM
This is lovely, Shadow. Your write your words as if you're waving a schiffon scarf in a breeze- very delicate and soothing. Thanks for visiting my verse, and I look forward to reading your works, along with a glass of wine and my Cat, Celeste- should make for a nice afternoon. Viv x
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/18/2015 4:12:00 PM
ty Viv hugs
Date: 4/16/2015 6:04:00 AM
Without a Shadow of a doubt this is lovely.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/16/2015 8:49:00 AM
ty Judy hugs
Date: 4/15/2015 11:34:00 AM
a lovely weave of words making spring a most exciting season.. how the flowers, air, and the whole scene enthrall, shadow.. thanks for appreciating my entry in your contest; much appreciated to wrote for you.. huggs
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Date: 4/16/2015 8:48:00 AM
ty Nette I loved your poem hugs
Date: 4/15/2015 8:10:00 AM
Nice flow of words attracting the reader with their imagery, resulting in creating a message above the words reenforced by that imagery. Beautifully written. Emile. #7
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Date: 4/16/2015 8:02:00 AM
ty Emile hugs

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