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Morning Light Haiku

Morning Light Haiku by Amy Swanson 12/2008 The morning sunrise So beautiful to behold Glowing breath of light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/22/2008 8:03:00 PM
Your touch at haiku is fire, I like the way you flow them all...Raul
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Date: 12/2/2008 12:35:00 PM
More than the well expressed beauty of the sunrise, I feel hope dawning on a new day. So lovely. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/2/2008 8:06:00 AM
Breathtaking and beautiful! Great job, Amy! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/2/2008 8:01:00 AM
Perfect presentation , Amy .... Your last line speaks volumes , and sums up the whole piece ..
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Date: 12/2/2008 6:32:00 AM
excellent Haiku. Love the brightness of the piece. Chris.
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Date: 12/2/2008 6:28:00 AM
Good one Amy..This is such a tricky form but I love it. BG
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Date: 12/2/2008 5:56:00 AM
EXCELLENT! I just read a four line, 26 syllable haiku about what...I'm still trying to figure out, but it was not about nature....and got a big wordful of why it was. This was awesome, Amy. I like the picturesque description. I can see this breathtaking sunrise.
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