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Morning Light Haiku

Morning Light Haiku by Amy Swanson 12/2008 The morning sunrise So beautiful to behold Glowing breath of light

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Raul Moreno

Date: 12/22/2008 8:03:00 PM

Your touch at haiku is fire, I like the way you flow them all...Raul

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/2/2008 12:35:00 PM

More than the well expressed beauty of the sunrise, I feel hope dawning on a new day. So lovely. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/2/2008 8:06:00 AM

Breathtaking and beautiful! Great job, Amy! ~ Carrie

Sean Kelly

Date: 12/2/2008 8:01:00 AM

Perfect presentation , Amy .... Your last line speaks volumes , and sums up the whole piece ..

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/2/2008 6:32:00 AM

excellent Haiku. Love the brightness of the piece. Chris.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/2/2008 6:28:00 AM

Good one Amy..This is such a tricky form but I love it. BG

Celeste Butler-Mendez

Date: 12/2/2008 5:56:00 AM

EXCELLENT! I just read a four line, 26 syllable haiku about what...I'm still trying to figure out, but it was not about nature....and got a big wordful of why it was. This was awesome, Amy. I like the picturesque description. I can see this breathtaking sunrise.