Morning In Glorious Emergence

I manage my planned early rise in hopes dawn will kindly provide me 
time before others converge in the joy bounce of family noise.
With silent glee for this vacation cabin, well worth our money splurge,
I tiptoe out to the porch.

Fresh, early morning beauty twinkle-dance performs upon the lake’s 
sleepy surface and the sight sigh-settles bliss among my accrued 
anxiety bits.  Nature’s most enchanting chords sound-lift my awe
with full force as truth re-surges within my soul.

Morning in glorious emergence nurses me with a wordless,
restoring sermon felt purge.  I watch life at the nearby pond 
where birds group-peek for worms while three unconcerned swans 
mellow glide behind the fronds.

Glad am I for nature’s catharsis to all in me the city daily twists.
I am so porch and nature settled, I nearly miss the eager kettle hiss
warning that family is in my midst and hungry for their morning grits.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/18/2018 12:01:00 PM
So pleased you entered this delightful poem for the contest, CayCay, otherwise I would not have come to read it. The beauty of nature takes our breath away! ~ Congratulations on this high-flying win. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/18/2018 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Caycay!:-) I enjoyed reading this fabulous poem!
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Date: 11/18/2018 7:13:00 AM
I love this sweet poem CayCay! A Fave! Congratulations on your first placement in Brian's contest! : ) xxoo
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Date: 6/2/2018 8:17:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, CayCay.
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Date: 5/20/2018 4:58:00 AM
Congratulations, CayCay on your win. Very fine narrativ
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Date: 5/19/2018 4:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed this very much. So realistic.
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Date: 5/18/2018 1:58:00 AM
Congratulations, CayCay on your well deserved win.
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:34:00 AM
Caycay, the way you used your own style of made up phrases works VERY Well in this poem. I just love this one. You came up with some very cool images, like the one, chords sound-lift my awe. Very creative work. I hope to see it high on the chart. I am getting ready to get off here now. I spent two hours here last night and had only 7 comments to return this morning, which is fine. I need to get ready for movie day!! (and jump on my trampoline first!) It's so good when you visit Soup!
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Date: 2/26/2018 7:53:00 AM
wow, great free verse sweet CayCay! Good luck it will do well in the contest I'm sure :) -luloo
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 2/26/2018 10:34:00 AM
Hey, thanks for the comments - they brought me joy. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 2/26/2018 5:46:00 AM
A glorious poem CayCay..enjoyed reading about the morning scene by the cabin and pond..you ended it with clever words... kettle hiss and quick grits. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/26/2018 10:34:00 AM
I appreciate your comments very much, I'm happy to have them. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 2/25/2018 12:57:00 PM
Very nice CayCay. I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 2/26/2018 10:35:00 AM
If you enjoyed it, then the poem already won. Good to see you. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 2/25/2018 12:25:00 PM
A most enjoyable read, CayCay. Well done.
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Date: 2/26/2018 10:36:00 AM
Thanks, Line - I always appreciate your presence in comment form. All the best to you ... CayCay
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