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Morning Hair

Morning Hair

Gray white straight wiry
Frightening straight yelling wire
Makes Brillo looked permed.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2010 4:36:00 PM

MY, it does sound a bit frightening. Love that last line. Hope you get it all "ironed out" pretty easily!

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/3/2010 6:18:00 PM

Very nice Haiku...Thanks for sharing...Jimmy

Skat A

Date: 4/25/2010 6:33:00 PM

Funny Haiku write,,Irma

Date: 4/24/2010 7:19:00 PM

Got a good chuckle out of this one. Thanks for sharing this day brightener. Keep on writing. Karen

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/24/2010 9:08:00 AM

The title intrtigued me as I sat at my computer with mine. I love it.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/23/2010 6:31:00 PM

funny--I think some meds I took is making my hair fall out and it does not lay right lately. it sticks straight up in the morning. oh well..life goes on,