Morning Hair

Morning Hair

Gray white straight wiry
Frightening straight yelling wire
Makes Brillo looked permed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 4:36 PM
MY, it does sound a bit frightening. Love that last line. Hope you get it all "ironed out" pretty easily!
Anderson Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 6:18 PM
Very nice Haiku...Thanks for sharing...Jimmy
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April 25, 2010 at 6:33 PM
Funny Haiku write,,Irma
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April 24, 2010 at 7:19 PM
Got a good chuckle out of this one. Thanks for sharing this day brightener. Keep on writing. Karen
Johnson Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 9:08 AM
The title intrtigued me as I sat at my computer with mine. I love it.
Culverhouse Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 6:31 PM
funny--I think some meds I took is making my hair fall out and it does not lay right lately. it sticks straight up in the morning. oh well..life goes on,
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