Morning Frost

Nature's clock bids me
come view her canvas anew
white crystals glist’ning
highlighted by virgin rays
the sparkle of Winter's breath
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 11:57 AM
A lovely tanka, Jaycee...very suitable for this time of year. Season's greetings:) // paul
Cervenka Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 5:23 PM
Thank you my friend. Are you feeling frosty yet?
Smith Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 1:10 PM
A beautiful picture you painted Jan. I can see myself standing with a cup of coffee looking out the window.
Cervenka Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Thank you. I love the way everything looks early in the morning, especially with a nice cover of frost...take a step back, Tim, your melting the frost on the windows....lol
Boddie Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 12:33 PM
nature's Beauty is strong in this to the point the reader can't resist being caught up in all the bliss of truly realizing That God Does Exist....Beautiful write jaycee....;)
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