Morning Fog

Morning Fog

This morning
when there is much to do inside,
there is fog outside my window.
The fog I sought two mornings ago
that caused me to dash to the car
in hopes I could grab a coffee
and sit by the lake,
witness to the softening of the world,
treetops indistinct, not yet awakened from their dreams.

By the time I reached the street
rain had dissolved,
  captured,
     drunk up the tiny molecules
         of water playing fog.

I like rain, too, so I stayed on the road,
found myself coffee and a breakfast
by a temperature controlled fireplace.
Despite the rain, the little cafe
quickly became peopled 
and I had to move on.

The soft shield of fog
was what I was hungry for,
not the food I left half eaten.
The desire to be 
fogged in, alone or companionable,
putting thoughts to paper
or contentedly one 
  with the downy view,
    the lack of detail,
     the absence of certainty,
      the enveloping moisture 
       making all things
         remember 
          what it was like to be born.

We are all born 
In some kind of moisture --
pushing through the dark damp soil,
or squeezed through a tunnel of flesh,
causing someone pain 
   for the first of many times. 
Or we peck our way through
   a fragile/sturdy shell, 
    wet with possibility,
or we're loosed with a hundred siblings
   into a salty waterscape of danger,
    calculating our chances.

For all of us, 
our first vision must be a little foggy,
our possibility of success unclear.
But
every foggy morning 
crawls into my soul
to whisper
what it could be
to be reborn.
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Edmonds  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 1:07 AM
A marvellous write Erin, enjoyed the read… Beryl
Junaid Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 8:25 AM
I absolutely love your poem, Erin. It's a multi-layered triumph that just absorbed me into its fog (pun intended) and I still find myself hazed in the best of ways. You have refreshing talent, and I can't wait to read more from you. Happy writing, dear poet, and be blessed always, Hiba :)
Cummings Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 9:40 AM
Wonderfully descriptive with a talent for making the reader feel the spirit of the verse. Well done. Let the pen continue…
Sim Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 9:50 AM
Thank you, Kevin! I'm ready for some Spring fog, inspiring the pen to continue.
Gifford Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 12:59 AM
Hello Erin, this is beautifully written, I was hooked to the end. A great read. Wishing you a fabulous rest of the week, fellow poet.
Sim Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 9:50 AM
I so appreciate the compliment and wish you, too, an inspiring week for poetry.
Scott Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 10:55 AM
Bravo Erin! What a great piece of word art! I could not stop reading until the end. Thanks for sharing your gift.
Sim Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 9:51 AM
Mary, thanks for your enthusiasm. I appreciate that my foggy day rambles held you until "the good part!"
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 10:10 AM
Hello Erin Sim, This poem you created shows to pay attention to what the fog is trying to tell you. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 10:14 AM
Hello erin, Yes I will go out to be inspired. Thjank you. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene
Sim Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 9:53 AM
Thanks for taking the time to comment, Darlene. Go out and be inspired!
Dela Cruz Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 9:25 AM
Great read. 1st vision that I saw was this, "The wind blows where it wishes, and you hear the sound of it, but cannot tell where it comes from and where it goes. So is everyone who is born of the Spirit.” John 3:8 "We don't yet see things clearly. We're squinting in a fog, peering through a mist. But it won't be long before the weather clears and the sun shines bright! We'll see it all then, see it all as clearly as God sees us, knowing him directly just as he knows us!"1cor,13:12
Sim Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 9:52 AM
I'm glad that my writing inspires other thoughts and connections. Thanks for your reply.
Dubarry Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 8:59 AM
Great poem it was a very interesting and was it based upon your very own personal experiences. Some people love the fog such as in foggy London town.
Sim Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 9:53 AM
I'd love to be in a foggy day in London town, Roxanne! Thanks for taking the time to reply.
Lander Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 8:23 AM
a profound, great read.
Sim Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 9:54 AM
I appreciate the kind words, Annie. Thank you!
Radice Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 11:09 PM
This makes for a great read. Welcome to Poetry Soup Erin. I really like the structure of your poem and how it flows exploring different aspects of fog. Atmosphere, too, drips from your words. An excellent first poem. Cheers - Gary
Sim Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 9:55 AM
Thanks, Gary. I've been disconnected from Poetry Soup for a while and hadn't seen your encouraging words. I appreciate them!
Agustin Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 5:24 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Sim Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 6:19 AM
Thank you. May your new year also be blessed.
Theraven Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 7:03 PM
Erin, I really enjoyed this poem. I liked the various types of fog described so well, in and out of a perceived comfort zone. "We are all born In some kind of moisture -- pushing through the dark damp soil, // causing someone pain for the first of many times. Brilliant write. -Richard
Sim Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 7:15 PM
Thanks so much, Richard. I'm new to this forum and appreciate the positive response.
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