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Morning Exercises

Bodies stretching with the dawn
                 look!
Earth wakes up yawning

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 1/14/2016 12:13:00 PM

Amazing!!!!

Darlene Gifford
Date: 1/14/2016 12:27:00 PM

Hello, J.W., Thank you for liking this poem I wrote last May. I don't believe I've read any of your poems, so I'll be visiting you soon.~~~Darlene

Funom Makama

Date: 5/28/2015 10:12:00 AM

Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!

Darlene Gifford
Date: 5/28/2015 2:54:00 PM

Your comments are much appreciated, Funom! And thanks for the 7 rating. Haiku's are a challenge to get much said In as few words as possible. (not like women, we are wordy when we talk! )

Thomas Martin

Date: 5/26/2015 9:05:00 PM

Enjoyable, Darlene!Like the imagery.

Darlene Gifford
Date: 5/27/2015 5:41:00 AM

You must have really liked this one, Thomas! You gave it a second read. Don't forget to do your morning exercises. One with the dawning.

Thomas Martin

Date: 5/21/2015 1:55:00 PM

Enjoyed this one!

Darlene Gifford
Date: 5/21/2015 1:59:00 PM

And I am enjoying yours as well, Thomas.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 5/21/2015 6:36:00 AM

Darlene, just called to say I like the originality of this haiku, have said it before I know but the variety of this form is always unique and pleasing~Delice

Darlene Gifford
Date: 5/21/2015 10:13:00 AM

That describes me completely, I love variety and to break molds, try something fresh and new. When those "Aha!" moments come, I run with them. As I'm sure you do , too. Thanks for letting me know.

Jack Ellison

Date: 5/17/2015 7:30:00 AM

I'm a-doing just that my dear Darlene! Thanks fro the morning smile... love and hugs, Jack xxx

Darlene Gifford
Date: 5/17/2015 10:39:00 AM

Morning smiles are good! I'm glad you are exercising, too. When I got the inspiration for this poem, I watched the day begin and my corner of the world seemed to yawn and stretch along with me.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/16/2015 2:49:00 PM

WOW I love it Darlene such a clever haiku! 7 :-) Hugs Jan xx

Darlene Gifford
Date: 5/16/2015 2:56:00 PM

Hi, friend, and thanks for liking my new haiku. I just wrote it last night and did not know how well it would be received. But if you like it, that is confirmation for me! Blessings, Darlene

Debra Harris

Date: 5/16/2015 1:30:00 PM

GOOD MORNING WORLD! a good way to start the day! I love it!

Darlene Gifford
Date: 5/16/2015 3:00:00 PM

Hello, Debra. Thanks, also, for giving me a thumbs up on my new haiku. Blessings on your day...Darlene

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