Morning Dew

morning dew --
sunlight reflects from
Spring blossoms
a delightful sneeze
as I spread bird seed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Godwin Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 7:28 AM
Your write is delightful, Charles and I know the sneeze you describe. You have the content for a beautiful Tanka, but in the spirit of helping, please know that the syllable count for Tanka's lines are: 5-7-5-7-7. I think you can easily expand your lovely thought and hope you don't mind the help. CayCay
Kent Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 5:51 AM
Well said little write.
Gupta Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 4:25 AM
Nice Tanka ...
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