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Morning Dew

morning dew -- sunlight reflects from Spring blossoms a delightful sneeze as I spread bird seed

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Date: 8/5/2016 7:28:00 AM
Your write is delightful, Charles and I know the sneeze you describe. You have the content for a beautiful Tanka, but in the spirit of helping, please know that the syllable count for Tanka's lines are: 5-7-5-7-7. I think you can easily expand your lovely thought and hope you don't mind the help. CayCay
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Date: 8/5/2016 5:51:00 AM
Well said little write.
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Date: 8/5/2016 4:25:00 AM
Nice Tanka ...
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