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Morning Dew

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a small poem about love's worries

The day is new and not yet lost to summer heat. Flowers blush and preen in morning breezes. Let me whisper fears before the day consumes you My fickle friend, another shadows your affections Distracted lover another twirls for your attention I'm losing confidence, and I think I'm losing you. In the remaining shadows, leaves still brandish dew

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2020 10:41:00 PM

You are a masterful word player, my friend. Wow!

Anais Vionet
Date: 7/4/2020 1:42:00 PM

Thank you so much =]

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/21/2020 10:22:00 PM

This is really a fine, delicate write. I don't know how to put this any other way, Anais: You've got 'it!' (i.e., that poetic feel, which can't really be taught). Lovely penned! :) Gershon

Anais Vionet
Date: 6/22/2020 8:21:00 AM

Thank you so much - that's very nice of you to say =]

Sand Blown

Date: 6/20/2020 12:31:00 PM

morning 'do'.....just fine : ) evening 'do'.....33'C....humid : / (nearly forgot....nice poem : ) stan sand

Anais Vionet
Date: 6/20/2020 1:55:00 PM

Thank you =]