Notes About The Poem

a small poem about love's worries

Morning Dew

The day is new and not yet lost to summer heat.
Flowers blush and preen in morning breezes.
Let me whisper fears before the day consumes you
My fickle friend, another shadows your affections
Distracted lover another twirls for your attention
I'm losing confidence, and I think I'm losing you.
In the remaining shadows, leaves still brandish dew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 10:41 PM
You are a masterful word player, my friend. Wow!
Vionet Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 1:42 PM
Thank you so much =]
Wolf Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 10:22 PM
This is really a fine, delicate write. I don't know how to put this any other way, Anais: You've got 'it!' (i.e., that poetic feel, which can't really be taught). Lovely penned! :) Gershon
Vionet Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 8:21 AM
Thank you so much - that's very nice of you to say =]
Blown Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 12:31 PM
morning 'do'.....just fine : ) evening 'do'.....33'C....humid : / (nearly forgot....nice poem : ) stan sand
Vionet Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 1:55 PM
Thank you =]
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