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Morning Crush

Awaken to the early morning sun dew gently clings to the grass The freshness of crisp morning air Feels breath-taking and pure The birds awaken before sunrise a variety of melodies float upon the mornings cool air Harmony exists in song I yawn.... Get up , get ready to start the day No signs of laziness do I display Up and at it is a motto I keep But man I need another hour of sleep I yawn..... The birds sang this lullaby My eyes closed I gave a sigh Next it was high noon Guess I will get up for this afternoon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/6/2013 12:08:00 AM
I love this,, ////i close my eyes and drift off myself at times. It feels so good to do that. How are you,,,, love Deb ;}
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Date: 6/27/2013 2:34:00 AM
This sounds cute to me.Every Sunday z like dis 2 me. :-)
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Date: 6/21/2013 2:12:00 PM
lol, I love a nice lie in too, Phyll. Hope you're feeling better now x
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Date: 6/14/2013 12:09:00 AM
haha, this one has humor and wit. Good one, my friend.
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Date: 6/8/2013 7:14:00 AM
Hi Phyllis, I like the use of alliteration in your poem.(the repeated use of I Yawn) is very nice. Well when you wake up...try getting up next thing you know sleep could drag you into the next day.
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Date: 6/7/2013 1:48:00 AM
- Phyllis, thanks for a delicious morning! - Love it! - Have a lovely weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/6/2013 8:57:00 PM
Very nice write. Enjoyed the read.
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