Morning Composure

jade brine reflections  
in morning light composure
graces the shoreline

Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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K. Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Your first line speaks volumes, beautiful imagery! And congrats on your win Caryl :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 2:27 PM
This is really nice. I take it you placed with it. Congratulations! LUv, andrea
Freeman Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 8:12 AM
Brilliant entry Caryl. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 7:28 PM
Congrats on your win. fine write
Richards Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 5:50 PM
This is a beauty...."Jade brine reflections...I wouldn't have thought of such a inspired line! Great work!!! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carrie
La France Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 4:58 PM
This is very lovely, congratulations on your contest win... now for your assignment in my In Search of the Human Mind contest, your assignment is ... illusions... love Constance
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March 28, 2010 at 4:50 PM
I really like this. It has both description and imagination. You should be proud. Regards, Gerard.
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March 28, 2010 at 1:08 PM
Nice use of imagery for a peaceful feel. Congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
Haick Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 11:32 AM
Hey Caryl, Congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, love, Audrey
Owens Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 10:26 AM
Beautiful Haiku...congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty
Fraser Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Caryl, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest > this is the pick of the bunch for me > one magical word > Jade >> James
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March 28, 2010 at 6:58 AM
Congrats Caryl on your winning poem and placement in the Champagne Skies contest.. a beautiful Haiku and well earned trip to the winners circle.. enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie
Brown Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Caryl. Love Carol
Moreno Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 1:04 AM
Caryl, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
Owens Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 10:10 PM
Very nice Haiku...good luck in the contest...Marty
Devonshire Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 10:15 AM
A very creative haiku filled with brilliant imagery, Caryl. Best wishes for success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Murphy Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 9:12 AM
very nice and good luck in the contest faleshia
Green Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 8:49 AM
Jade brine reflections- love that line.
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March 26, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Refreshing sound .Thanks
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