JC Brul Poet Haiku

morning coffee hiku

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   \             /        vintage mug on lap
    |            |           s                                    s softly to me ~
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                                        m               i
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                                                      s
                                                        
                             slow morning hugs me

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Bernardo F. Asuncion June 11, 2025 at 8:30 PM Author's artistry works well. Huge congrats, Sister JCB.

Valsa George June 10, 2025 at 10:01 PM First I had difficulty in making it out. On second attempt, I got it clearly. I picture you with a cup of coffee early in the morning with its steam spiralling to you. Great picturesque haiku.Congratulations dear Jez on your first place win.

Kim Rodrigues June 10, 2025 at 4:44 AM Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2025 at 11:00 PM Love it. Congrats

Kim Rodrigues June 9, 2025 at 4:35 PM Quite a fun one…the whimsy of morning coffee!

Jan Allison June 9, 2025 at 4:01 AM wow this is SI creative JCB - I prefer tea myself though lol:-) hugs Jan xx JC Brul June 9, 2025 at 4:42 AM Thank you, Jan. Here's a cup of tea for you \__/? Stay sweet. ^___^ JCB