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morning coffee hiku

~ ~ ~ \ / vintage mug on lap | | s s softly to me ~ ________ t l e a a r m i p s slow morning hugs me

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Date: 6/11/2025 8:30:00 PM
Author's artistry works well. Huge congrats, Sister JCB.
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Date: 6/10/2025 10:01:00 PM
First I had difficulty in making it out. On second attempt, I got it clearly. I picture you with a cup of coffee early in the morning with its steam spiralling to you. Great picturesque haiku.Congratulations dear Jez on your first place win.
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Date: 6/10/2025 4:44:00 AM
Congrats!
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Date: 6/9/2025 11:00:00 PM
Love it. Congrats
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Date: 6/9/2025 4:35:00 PM
Quite a fun one…the whimsy of morning coffee!
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Date: 6/9/2025 5:39:00 AM
Creative JCB. I'm sipping mine as I read this
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Date: 6/9/2025 7:36:00 AM
Thank you Tom. Happy sipping.:)
Date: 6/9/2025 4:01:00 AM
wow this is SI creative JCB - I prefer tea myself though lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/9/2025 4:42:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. Here's a cup of tea for you \__/? Stay sweet. ^___^ JCB

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