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For The Contest, "Stirring My Tea"
Sponsor, Fire Bird

Morning Coffee


Not fully wakened till I have a sip
   of what that sweet aroma leads me to
our breakfast table where he pours for me
   my coffee cup filled up with fresh ground brew.

That sip embraces every sleepy cell;
   awakes my heart with a new morning hope;
alerts to meet the goals the day lays out
   and lifts my spirits to triumph or cope.

For me, this is a waking ritual
   not pursued just any time of day;
a morning gift alone at breakfast time-
   just us together with our prized cafe'.


~1st Place~
Contest: Wake Up With Coffee Or Tea Contest
Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues
Judged: 12/11/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 12/13/2016 6:55:00 PM
very nice; enjoyed the read -JT
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Date: 12/12/2016 12:06:00 PM
Like the "every sleepy cell" phrase! Feel like this most mornings! Congrats! :-)
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Date: 12/11/2016 10:07:00 PM
Hi Sandra, You've penned such a well written piece. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 12/11/2016 8:14:00 PM
A 7 for your very well-written WINNING poem, Sandra! Janice
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Date: 12/11/2016 6:50:00 PM
The last two lines sums it up nicely. Congrats Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/11/2016 7:27:00 PM
Thank you very much, Phil! Sandra
Date: 12/11/2016 6:00:00 PM
Coming back with congrats!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/11/2016 7:27:00 PM
Thanks again, Agnes! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/11/2016 4:44:00 PM
I can see that first cup being poured and love the second stanza that brings the caffeine to life, especially - "to meet the goals the day lays out". Congrats and thank you for entering my contest, Andrea!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/11/2016 7:26:00 PM
Oh, no problem, Kim! Have done that myself! Thank you very much for the great contest and for liking my poem enough for the great placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/11/2016 4:45:00 PM
I feel like an idiot! So sorry! Sandra I meant Sandra! Hugs! Please except my apology!
Date: 12/2/2016 4:31:00 PM
Yes! It is a ritual for me too. A wonderful way to start the day with Folgers in my cup. Elaine
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/2/2016 8:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Elaine! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/2/2016 4:13:00 PM
Nice tribute to your morning coffee - I can completely relate. Good luck for the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/2/2016 8:45:00 PM
Thank you very much, Agnes! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/2/2016 12:00:00 PM
I'm an all day coffee drinker. From zero degrees to a hundred. I'm all about me some coffee. I loved your poem, Mrs Sandra:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/2/2016 8:45:00 PM
Thank you for you nice comment, Daniel! Sandra
Date: 12/2/2016 11:16:00 AM
I have to have my morning fix but it's of tea Sandra but hubby loves his coffee:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/2/2016 8:44:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jan! I also love tea and I drink that later during the day. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/2/2016 9:27:00 AM
Very nice Sandra! I like this. Good luck in the contest :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/2/2016 8:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/2/2016 8:57:00 AM
Perfectly expressed morning desires Sandra and yes, coffee is definitely a morning desire. :) Beautifully done my friend.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/2/2016 8:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Chris! Sandra
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