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Morning Breaks

Brother Sun yawns and his breath Of fire falls on earths’ ground. Its warmth penetrates and the Flowers have a stretch.

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Date: 10/10/2018 8:22:00 PM

So lovely!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/11/2018 6:12:00 AM

Thank you, Kim

Date: 10/10/2018 11:21:00 AM

I like your dodoitsu. I have never heard of it, and I especially like Brother Sun. It immediately warmed my heart, M.L.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/11/2018 6:12:00 AM

Oh good and thanks so much.

Date: 10/10/2018 10:36:00 AM

Very nice! I enjoyed this today :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/11/2018 6:12:00 AM

I'm glad.

Date: 10/10/2018 10:03:00 AM

Lovely write my friend...enjoyed every word...great Dodoitsu M.L...love & light...^WW^

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/11/2018 6:12:00 AM

Thanks so much.

Date: 10/10/2018 9:01:00 AM

A story beautifully told..ending with flowers.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/11/2018 6:12:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay.

Date: 10/10/2018 8:03:00 AM

- A beautiful picture with few words, M.L. :) - Best wishes for a nice autumn week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/11/2018 6:13:00 AM

Thank you and the same wishes to you.