Morning Breaks

Brother Sun yawns and his breath Of fire falls on earths’ ground. Its warmth penetrates and the Flowers have a stretch.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 8:22 PM
So lovely!
Kiser Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 6:12 AM
Thank you, Kim
Krutsinger Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 11:21 AM
I like your dodoitsu. I have never heard of it, and I especially like Brother Sun. It immediately warmed my heart, M.L.
Kiser Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 6:12 AM
Oh good and thanks so much.
Sands Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 10:36 AM
Very nice! I enjoyed this today :)
Kiser Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 6:12 AM
I'm glad.
Warrior Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 10:03 AM
Lovely write my friend...enjoyed every word...great Dodoitsu M.L...love & light...^WW^
Kiser Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 6:12 AM
Thanks so much.
Pandit Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 9:01 AM
A story beautifully told..ending with flowers.
Kiser Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 6:12 AM
Thank you, Vijay.
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 8:03 AM
- A beautiful picture with few words, M.L. :) - Best wishes for a nice autumn week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kiser Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 6:13 AM
Thank you and the same wishes to you.
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