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Morning Blues

Morning Blues Clock rings Bells sing Eyes wink Can't think Flannelmouth Wet snout Stretching limbs Looks grim Hair mess Birds nest Mouthwash Bad breath Late up Break-fast Drink tea Need a pee More late Slam gate Gassy **** Runs fast Feet pain No gain Miss train Broke a vein Gives up I suck Mouth foams Limps home Back fired Now tired In bed Heavy eyed Butt aches Gods sake! No strut Eyes shut This sheep Fast asleep Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 25.08.2020

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Dave Cox

Date: 8/8/2021 5:02:00 PM

Hi Emilia, liked this, sounds like a grueling routine. Creates imagery, I can see you doing this. Take care Dave

Emilia James
Date: 8/10/2021 2:13:00 AM

Thank you Dave, think we have all been through something similiar at some point. Was fun to write, might try do another one, Emilia : )

John Castellenas

Date: 10/12/2020 12:40:00 AM

Wonderful flow of words and thoughts. I had to read again. Made me smile, this early morning. Thank you Emilia for sharing the entertaining poetry.

Emilia James
Date: 10/22/2020 3:06:00 AM

Thank you John, your smile gave me a smile, pleased that you enjoyed it, Emilia : )

John Jones

Date: 9/17/2020 4:02:00 AM

love this, been there done that. Good write.

Emilia James
Date: 9/17/2020 1:16:00 PM

Thanks John, hope to do more of these. Emilia x : )

Christine Adams

Date: 8/30/2020 10:00:00 AM

Emilia I adore this. Brilliantly funny. Tempo creates rhythm adding to the simple say it as it is. This works well. You have great talent for making people smile. Christine Adams.

Emilia James
Date: 9/1/2020 2:54:00 AM

Thank you Christine, glad you enjoyed it. Emilia x : )