Emilia James Poet Free verse

Morning Blues

Morning Blues

Clock rings
Bells sing

Eyes wink
Can't think

Flannelmouth
Wet snout

Stretching limbs
Looks grim

Hair mess 
Birds nest

Mouthwash
Bad breath

Late up
Break-fast

Drink tea
Need a pee

More late
Slam gate

Gassy ****
Runs fast 

Feet pain
No gain

Miss train
Broke a vein

Gives up 
I suck

Mouth foams
Limps home

Back fired
Now tired

In bed
Heavy eyed

Butt aches
Gods sake!

No strut
Eyes shut

This sheep
Fast asleep

Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

        25.08.2020

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dave Cox August 8, 2021 at 5:02 PM Hi Emilia, liked this, sounds like a grueling routine. Creates imagery, I can see you doing this. Take care Dave Emilia James August 10, 2021 at 2:13 AM Thank you Dave, think we have all been through something similiar at some point. Was fun to write, might try do another one, Emilia : )

John Castellenas October 12, 2020 at 12:40 AM Wonderful flow of words and thoughts. I had to read again. Made me smile, this early morning. Thank you Emilia for sharing the entertaining poetry. Emilia James October 22, 2020 at 3:06 AM Thank you John, your smile gave me a smile, pleased that you enjoyed it, Emilia : )

John Jones September 17, 2020 at 4:02 AM love this, been there done that. Good write. Emilia James September 17, 2020 at 1:16 PM Thanks John, hope to do more of these. Emilia x : )

Christine Adams August 30, 2020 at 10:00 AM Emilia I adore this. Brilliantly funny. Tempo creates rhythm adding to the simple say it as it is. This works well. You have great talent for making people smile. Christine Adams. Emilia James September 1, 2020 at 2:54 AM Thank you Christine, glad you enjoyed it. Emilia x : )

James Inman August 29, 2020 at 7:39 AM Short lines create intensity and rhythm in your poem. Well done Emilia. Emilia James September 1, 2020 at 2:49 AM Thank you James, was a fun write to do : )

Caren Krutsinger August 28, 2020 at 1:23 PM This might seem easy to some. I am not one to think this. It is so fast paced, whimsical, and has a great pattern! Emilia James September 1, 2020 at 2:47 AM Thank you Caren : )

Franci Hoffman August 26, 2020 at 9:39 AM I loved the fast pace of this piece and your sense of humor. Emilia James August 27, 2020 at 2:57 PM Thank you Franci : ) I am known for my wacky sense of humour lol xx

Andreas Akun August 25, 2020 at 7:48 PM Short. Routine. To the point. Great poem. Emilia James August 27, 2020 at 2:52 PM Thank you Andreas : ) I enjoyed writing this.

Panagiota Romios August 25, 2020 at 4:40 PM Truly hysterical Nice to meet you, Emilia Panagiota USA Emilia James August 27, 2020 at 2:49 PM Thank you Panagiota and nice to meet you too, Emilia UK

Sharon Keely August 25, 2020 at 4:19 PM A witty and succinct account of the waking hours of real folks! Emilia James August 27, 2020 at 2:48 PM Thank you Sharon : )

Ryan J. Mccabe August 25, 2020 at 2:55 PM You have a different word for EVERYTHING! HA HA! Actually, I stole that from Steve Martin... Emilia James August 27, 2020 at 2:43 PM Thank you Ryan : ) my mum always use to say when I was a child I had an answer for everything lol

Janine Lever August 25, 2020 at 12:19 PM YAY! WELL DONE. very enjoyable. and structured to perfection. Emilia James August 25, 2020 at 1:30 PM Thank you Janine, Wasn't sure what type of poem to put this under as I'm so new to this. Glad you enjoyed this one too. Kindest Regards Emilia xx