Morning Bliss

dawn
songsters
trill sweet songs 
merry notes flow
through dales and hills
submerging hearts
in great joy
blissful
morn

beautybirdmusicninette

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Sara Kendrick

August 19, 2023 at 8:00 AM

Xaroncharoo(one definition is excellent or brilliant) work. Thanks for sharing this awesome one. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Your visits to my page are always uplifting. Sara

Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen

August 18, 2023 at 4:30 AM

adorable piece

Sotto Poet

August 17, 2023 at 6:29 PM

An exquisite piece of poetry, abundant with vivid descriptions and a seamless flow. Your choice of words is commendable.

Joseph P. DiMino

August 17, 2023 at 8:32 AM

I often sit out in my backyard, I have a huge fig tree, listening to the bird families, their wonderfully different songs, you get to know them. Your little gem here is a trilling reminder of how great and diverse, the many voices of God's Nature.