Notes About The Poem

Morn Dh

Blue sapphire night brought 
sight of first winter. 
Snowflakes from heaven, 
glimmer light cradles 
til earth is tucked in. 

We sit drinking
hot coco by 
a flaming fire,
Max our dog too.

Dad read a 
story; tucks 
us in bed. 

Snug, warm 
until

morn.

1/24/2018

Poetry Contest: Any Theme Diminished Hexaverse 
Sponsored by: Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Allison Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 8:22 AM
What acharming scene eve and the picture is perfect:-) many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 3:13 PM
a lovely comfy little scene. Those are what fondest memories are made of. Congrats for your win.
Y. Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 9:18 AM
Hi Eve, This is lovely! Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Messina Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 9:05 AM
A wonderful poem and story, Eve. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Great job on this form! Charlie :)
Murray Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 5:44 PM
This makes me want to be a child again Eve, it's so heart warming.
One Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 9:15 AM
Lovely poem Eve..
Onclaud Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 5:20 PM
makes me feel the goodness of family hour... superb wite, eve... huggs
Kiser Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 2:44 PM
Great imagery in this DM; good luck in the contest.
Sands Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 11:47 AM
Very nice Eve! Yes, warm and cozy! :)
La France Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 8:06 AM
Eve, your poem is so warm and cozy, I was wrapped in a fuzzy blanket of peace ~
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 4:52 AM
The warmth of close family is so beautifully expressed in this lovely poem Eve. Have a very happy birthday! : ) xxoo
Raven Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 4:31 AM
Hi Eve, such a dreamy, beautiful write. I love the content of this wonderful peace. It brings both peace and joy to the heart in its gentleness. A fave. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Krutsinger Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 1:50 AM
I have a grandson named Max, so that part made me smile. "Snowflakes from heaven, glimmer light cradles til earth is tucked in. " This imagery gave me a little spin on my head, I liked it so much. The whole poem is wonderful, Eve.
Vaso Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 1:23 AM
Very heartwarming!
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