More Wine

Loneliness comes creeping always the same way. Creeping, creeping making shadows, darkening my day. Days turn into nights. Nights turn back to days. I don’t dine - Just pour more wine; keep inside this haze. Wish my love gave a damn. He's as bad as that loneliness that’s creeping like some crazy prowling cat. Loneliness prowling round. Guess I’ll make it mine. Crazy cat mews the blues I just pour more wine. May 16, 2023 for Robert James Liguori's 'Joe Bonamassa Inspiration 4' Poetry Contest Inspired by Black Coffee song with joe Bonamassa and Beth Hart together
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Date: 5/18/2023 6:19:00 AM
"I don’t dine - Just pour more wine" - Beautiful lines. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/17/2023 2:29:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in the contest, great choice of songs with Joe and Beth !
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Date: 5/17/2023 2:03:00 AM
I cannot do without a glass of dark wine at lunch. Lovely poem.
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Date: 5/16/2023 7:50:00 PM
"Wish my love gave a damn." I enjoyed the song and your bluesy verse Andrea, Very nicely penned
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Date: 5/16/2023 5:37:00 PM
Spoken like a true wino:) You should've been a blues writer, Andrea
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/16/2023 5:45:00 PM
I don't drink but I tasted wine a few times and it was SO much better than black coffee!!
Date: 5/16/2023 4:40:00 PM
Very nice…I just pour more wine.
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Date: 5/16/2023 3:16:00 PM
That poor cat doesn't get any wine to get rid of its loneliness. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for your assuring review on my page. Sara
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