More Than Your Ear

Like Pablo Picasso's artistically rendered paintings & Mozart's ultimate piano concerto perfection you utterly moved me, as Monet's impressionistic wildflowers our love grew, flourishing amidst poetry's cultivated gardens
'Til you fashioned yourself subsequent to Van Gogh's insanity, leaving me beside myself now, I want to cut off more than your ear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 23, 2016 at 10:17 AM
bad follow through deserves a good follow up;-)
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October 12, 2016 at 7:10 AM
You write with an air of great self control, and deliver great poetry,...this is inspiring , seriously clever inspiring....Ian....
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October 12, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Thanks, I'm glad you weren't afraid Ian. ;)
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October 12, 2016 at 5:57 AM
What a wonderful masterpiece of love I found as I strolled through this gallery but I may have to restrict the use of palette knives in that final stanza. :) Very clever and creative and beautifully done. Funny, the validate numbers to the right are ENV and I do en-v your talent
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October 12, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Wow, you're brave Chris, funny review, thanks!
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October 12, 2016 at 4:10 AM
Ouch! Brutal punchline Paloma. Hoe you get back to Monet's garden soon.
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October 12, 2016 at 8:10 AM
Sorry Tony, it was meant to be humorous. :)
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