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More Than Your Ear

Like Pablo Picasso's artistically rendered paintings & Mozart's ultimate piano concerto perfection you utterly moved me, as Monet's impressionistic wildflowers our love grew, flourishing amidst poetry's cultivated gardens 'Til you fashioned yourself subsequent to Van Gogh's insanity, leaving me beside myself now, I want to cut off more than your ear

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/23/2016 10:17:00 AM

bad follow through deserves a good follow up;-)

Anthony Mark

Date: 10/12/2016 7:10:00 AM

You write with an air of great self control, and deliver great poetry,...this is inspiring , seriously clever inspiring....Ian....

Paloma P
Date: 10/12/2016 8:11:00 AM

Thanks, I'm glad you weren't afraid Ian. ;)

Chris Green

Date: 10/12/2016 5:57:00 AM

What a wonderful masterpiece of love I found as I strolled through this gallery but I may have to restrict the use of palette knives in that final stanza. :) Very clever and creative and beautifully done. Funny, the validate numbers to the right are ENV and I do en-v your talent

Paloma P
Date: 10/12/2016 8:11:00 AM

Wow, you're brave Chris, funny review, thanks!

Tony Devers

Date: 10/12/2016 4:10:00 AM

Ouch! Brutal punchline Paloma. Hoe you get back to Monet's garden soon.

Paloma P
Date: 10/12/2016 8:10:00 AM

Sorry Tony, it was meant to be humorous. :)