Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Rhyme

More Than Words Can Say, Papa

The first guy who kissed me by my lips
Tickled me down to my fingertips
Careful to handle me with every grip
Selfless love without a director's script

You are my first ever boyfriend
Guarding me, every now and then
Always ready to mend and defend
''My ideal man'', you set the blend

Your strong arms have held me dear
My shield through raging storm of fears
Same wide open arms keep me on cheer
Every time there are thunder rolling tears

A gaze likened to a tiger's eye
Strict and firm with my cry
Yet, tender daring me with tries
Letting me free to soar and fly

Although now, I'm more than twenty
Father,  your patience is so plenty
Providing me both love and penny
Even when things get so messy

Us, your family, is your sweetest cherry
With every ounce of life's' chevy
You remain ready and so sturdy
My love grows for you each day

Father... My ever dearest Papa.

Thank you for all love you display
I am sorry if by chance I disobey
Do know that I love you

More than those words (above)  say...

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1:37 am, May 01, 2014

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Skat A November 28, 2015 at 1:51 PM Olive, congrats on your win. SKAT

Kim Merryman November 27, 2015 at 1:41 PM A lovely heartfelt tribute to your Papa! Great write, Olive! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Richard Lamoureux November 27, 2015 at 8:25 AM This is a sweet dedication. Congratulations.

Michael Tor November 26, 2015 at 5:18 AM Heartfelt and tender Olive for a very special man.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 26, 2015 at 3:53 AM Congrats on ur win with this poem Olive.. great work!

James Fraser March 19, 2015 at 3:54 PM Ones love for her father abounds from the poets words. Olive, this is such a lovely poem about your father, hugs//Jamesxxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 26, 2015 at 7:05 AM thanks much James.. =`) hugs!

Dan Helppi October 26, 2014 at 10:34 PM The last line here is love full. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 26, 2015 at 6:55 AM thank you Dan.. =`)

Poet Destroyer A June 15, 2014 at 7:22 PM Anytime Olive, hope you are having a sweet day...Linda

Poet Destroyer A June 11, 2014 at 10:23 PM Olive,, Congratulations, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love ~LINDA Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 14, 2014 at 5:27 AM ThanksLinda.. :)

Nette Onclaud June 10, 2014 at 7:46 PM you touch me with this affectionate tribute,eloi.. congrats and huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 11, 2014 at 2:20 PM :) Thank you Nette.. :) hugs and hugs too.. :)

Deb Wilson June 10, 2014 at 9:43 AM Such a charming tribute to your papa...Congrats ...love, Deb Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 3:03 PM Thank you so much Deb.. :) God bless you always. :D

Pandita Sietesantos June 10, 2014 at 8:41 AM Beautiful, moving tribute to your Papa - excellent write.Congratulations on a great win! Kindest regards! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 3:02 PM Thanks MUch PAndita.. :) your remarks are truly inspirational. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta June 9, 2014 at 10:55 PM Nicely done. congrats on the win, olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 9, 2014 at 11:55 PM thank you/// :)

Robert Lindley June 9, 2014 at 8:45 PM A great tribute to your father my friend! Congrats on your win!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 9, 2014 at 11:54 PM THanks much.. :)

Joyce Johnson June 9, 2014 at 7:26 PM A great and loving daddy is a girl's greatest treasure. Congratulations that you have him. Love, Joyce Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 9, 2014 at 11:54 PM Thank you so much.. :)

Andrea Dietrich June 3, 2014 at 3:25 PM a very sweet tribute to your papa. Will you give this poem to him as a Father's Day gift? Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 8, 2014 at 12:51 PM I hope too Andrea..:) someday when I'll get home I'll give him this personally..:)

Mohammad Abedin June 1, 2014 at 4:51 PM nice poem Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 3, 2014 at 6:23 AM Thanks for the drop by Mohammad.. :) GBu

Paul Callus June 1, 2014 at 4:36 PM Talking like this to parents does not always come easy, but with this poem you have achieved what you set out to do....a fitting tribute to your father and to yourself for it also shows what wonderful persons you both are:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 3:08 PM Oh thank you Paul.. :) i don;t know what to say.. :D im scared if you will be t=on the honorary judge.. :D?!!!! weeee Paul Callus June 10, 2014 at 2:15 PM CONGRATULATIONS because this poem DID merit a top placing. [Can't say the same of the winning list!!!] Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 3, 2014 at 6:19 AM yes.. :) I have wanted to touched all the aspects a father should be.. and that's what i put it here as this I saw in my father.. :) oh!!!!! thanks dearie Paul,.. you are as well wonderful.. :)

Tim Smith May 31, 2014 at 9:23 PM A beautiful piece for your papa.. He will be proud... Hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 3, 2014 at 6:17 AM OH thanks Tim.. well :) this here.. :) I do not share this to him but someday someday I will show him this.. :D hugs too.. :D

Robert Lindley May 31, 2014 at 7:50 PM Impressive right and great love and devotion shown as it should be my friend!! Bravooooooo!!!!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 3, 2014 at 6:14 AM Yes, i love my father very much Robert.. :) He has been mostly away from me and once we don't talk as much but nevertheless each time there is chance to talk.. wow!!! i feel and feel through his eyes and his words his love... :) so i thank God for this.. :)

Jan Allison May 31, 2014 at 7:02 PM Simply delightful! Hugs Jan xxxxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 1, 2014 at 4:28 PM Thank you so much Jan.. :)