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More Than Words Can Say, Papa

The first guy who kissed me by my lips
Tickled me down to my fingertips
Careful to handle me with every grip
Selfless love without a director's script

You are my first ever boyfriend
Guarding me, every now and then
Always ready to mend and defend
''My ideal man'', you set the blend

Your strong arms have held me dear
My shield through raging storm of fears
Same wide open arms keep me on cheer
Every time there are thunder rolling tears

A gaze likened to a tiger's eye
Strict and firm with my cry
Yet, tender daring me with tries
Letting me free to soar and fly

Although now, I'm more than twenty
Father,  your patience is so plenty
Providing me both love and penny
Even when things get so messy

Us, your family, is your sweetest cherry
With every ounce of life's' chevy
You remain ready and so sturdy
My love grows for you each day

Father... My ever dearest Papa.

Thank you for all love you display
I am sorry if by chance I disobey
Do know that I love you

More than those words (above)  say...

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1:37 am, May 01, 2014

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Skat A Date: 11/28/2015 1:51:00 PM Olive, congrats on your win. SKAT Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 11/27/2015 1:41:00 PM A lovely heartfelt tribute to your Papa! Great write, Olive! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/27/2015 8:25:00 AM This is a sweet dedication. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 11/26/2015 5:18:00 AM Heartfelt and tender Olive for a very special man. Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/26/2015 3:53:00 AM Congrats on ur win with this poem Olive.. great work! Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 3/19/2015 3:54:00 PM Ones love for her father abounds from the poets words. Olive, this is such a lovely poem about your father, hugs//Jamesxxx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/26/2015 7:05:00 AM thanks much James.. =`) hugs!

Dan Helppi Date: 10/26/2014 10:34:00 PM The last line here is love full. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/26/2015 6:55:00 AM thank you Dan.. =`)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/15/2014 7:22:00 PM Anytime Olive, hope you are having a sweet day...Linda Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/11/2014 10:23:00 PM Olive,, Congratulations, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love ~LINDA Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/14/2014 5:27:00 AM ThanksLinda.. :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/10/2014 7:46:00 PM you touch me with this affectionate tribute,eloi.. congrats and huggs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 2:20:00 PM :) Thank you Nette.. :) hugs and hugs too.. :)

Deb Wilson Date: 6/10/2014 9:43:00 AM Such a charming tribute to your papa...Congrats ...love, Deb Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 3:03:00 PM Thank you so much Deb.. :) God bless you always. :D

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/10/2014 8:41:00 AM Beautiful, moving tribute to your Papa - excellent write.Congratulations on a great win! Kindest regards! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 3:02:00 PM Thanks MUch PAndita.. :) your remarks are truly inspirational. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/9/2014 10:55:00 PM Nicely done. congrats on the win, olive Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/9/2014 11:55:00 PM thank you/// :)

Robert Lindley Date: 6/9/2014 8:45:00 PM A great tribute to your father my friend! Congrats on your win!!!! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/9/2014 11:54:00 PM THanks much.. :)

Joyce Johnson Date: 6/9/2014 7:26:00 PM A great and loving daddy is a girl's greatest treasure. Congratulations that you have him. Love, Joyce Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/9/2014 11:54:00 PM Thank you so much.. :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/3/2014 3:25:00 PM a very sweet tribute to your papa. Will you give this poem to him as a Father's Day gift? Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/8/2014 12:51:00 PM I hope too Andrea..:) someday when I'll get home I'll give him this personally..:)

Mohammad Abedin Date: 6/1/2014 4:51:00 PM nice poem Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/3/2014 6:23:00 AM Thanks for the drop by Mohammad.. :) GBu

Paul Callus Date: 6/1/2014 4:36:00 PM Talking like this to parents does not always come easy, but with this poem you have achieved what you set out to do....a fitting tribute to your father and to yourself for it also shows what wonderful persons you both are:) // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 3:08:00 PM Oh thank you Paul.. :) i don;t know what to say.. :D im scared if you will be t=on the honorary judge.. :D?!!!! weeee Paul Callus Date: 6/10/2014 2:15:00 PM CONGRATULATIONS because this poem DID merit a top placing. [Can't say the same of the winning list!!!] Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/3/2014 6:19:00 AM yes.. :) I have wanted to touched all the aspects a father should be.. and that's what i put it here as this I saw in my father.. :) oh!!!!! thanks dearie Paul,.. you are as well wonderful.. :)

Tim Smith Date: 5/31/2014 9:23:00 PM A beautiful piece for your papa.. He will be proud... Hugs Tim Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/3/2014 6:17:00 AM OH thanks Tim.. well :) this here.. :) I do not share this to him but someday someday I will show him this.. :D hugs too.. :D

Robert Lindley Date: 5/31/2014 7:50:00 PM Impressive right and great love and devotion shown as it should be my friend!! Bravooooooo!!!!!!! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/3/2014 6:14:00 AM Yes, i love my father very much Robert.. :) He has been mostly away from me and once we don't talk as much but nevertheless each time there is chance to talk.. wow!!! i feel and feel through his eyes and his words his love... :) so i thank God for this.. :)

Jan Allison Date: 5/31/2014 7:02:00 PM Simply delightful! Hugs Jan xxxxx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/1/2014 4:28:00 PM Thank you so much Jan.. :)