More Than the Picture and the Postcards

Nothing do I have of  him except some post cards
and the one picture of himself he sent me once he’d gone away.
No piece of clothing do I have to press against my face
and breathe in the wonder of his essence.
Stored in an old worn treasure chest are the picture and the postcards.
Rarely do I take them out; I do not need to
because his beautiful face is imprinted forever in my mind.

I knew him but one week of my young life.
Old Buick Rivieras remind me of 
our final night of glorious romance.
Is he still out there somewhere in this world
remembering me as I remember him?
This I cannot know, but I imagine it is so.

The picture and the postcards – tucked away -
are the tangible pieces of evidence that he existed in my life.
But the image of his dark, tender eyes fixated on me,
and the memory of his smooth kisses and sweet caresses
one magical September eve
are my favorite mementos
of the boy from Quebec.

March 13, 2021  
For Malabika Ray Choudhury's "I Remember" Poetry Contest
Now for John Hamilton's Your Best Free Verse So Far This Year Poetry Contest
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Alex Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 6:43 AM
Melancholic - Really Poetic.
Hamilton Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Congrats Andrea on great storytelling, usually I like free verse more poetic and less prose, but, this was very compelling!
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 2:57 PM
I read many of the winning entries and saw a few that seemed like my style as well. I think I will never get free verse!! anyway thanks for the win at least!!
Alex Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 11:04 PM
Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 2:44 PM
Congratulations on your win. A magical story/write with your magical September, picture and postcards. Great memories are the best. Have a blessed day.................
Dubey Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 1:52 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea . What a wonderful poem you penned.
Roper Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 8:45 PM
Back with congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Edmonds  Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 4:51 PM
A beautiful reminiscent poem Andrea, that spark a first love left smoulders in the chambers of one's heart. Congratulations on your top of the list win ~ Belle
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 3:56 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea - loved your poem ~ Mala
Hankins Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Wow! This is exquisite, poignant writing. I wonder whatever happened to that "boy from Quebec?" Nice work and very deserving of a first place finish, Andrea.
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 1:30 PM
I wish I knew myself, L. I tried FB but all I recall is his name but too many have his name: Guy Loranger and I think he was born maybe in '52 because he was a November baby and when I just turned 17 in September, he was 19, but probably going on 20!
Y. Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 1:31 PM
thanks, my friend. I had fun writing it.
Y. Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:40 AM
Hi Andrea, What a good entry for the contest theme. It's sad yet very romantic—many long to have such an encounter. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
Brewer Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 8:34 PM
There is a beautiful, vivid evocation of pure romance! Well written! Andrea.
Bayles Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 4:57 PM
Very powerful, Andrea. The imagery is great, as is the emotion. I like the lines- The pictures and postcards tucked away/are tangible piece of evidence that he existed in my life. Mike
Devonshire Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 2:00 PM
Andrea, the story is similar to "Bridges of Madison County" and I hope the boy from Quebec is enjoying a good life now. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn (Soup Mail)
Pandit Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 5:32 AM
Rejoicing in memories, Andrea. Some dreams are so special--as this one is.
Jayasankar Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 4:03 AM
Beautiful memories to cherish... Andrea... so romantic... Best wishes in the contest... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Kannan Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 1:46 AM
That's so lovely to recall such memories in a cute way... Beautifully did, Andrea... Good luck in the contest...
Buhagiar Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 12:24 AM
Ah that boy from Quebec. You could have been a Canadian by now. Not to be. Love lost and can only be recaptured in memories. Lovely romantic poem.
Roper Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 9:08 PM
Love your romantic poem. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Theraven Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 6:47 PM
Andrea, Pure passion at a price. Very nice scrapbook dark-eyed memories from a kind heart. Perhaps there is a Buick out there that remembers two lover's embraced in a moment of bliss, and a kiss. -Richard
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