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More Than the Picture and the Postcards

Nothing do I have of him except some post cards and the one picture of himself he sent me once he’d gone away. No piece of clothing do I have to press against my face and breathe in the wonder of his essence. Stored in an old worn treasure chest are the picture and the postcards. Rarely do I take them out; I do not need to because his beautiful face is imprinted forever in my mind. I knew him but one week of my young life. Old Buick Rivieras remind me of our final night of glorious romance. Is he still out there somewhere in this world remembering me as I remember him? This I cannot know, but I imagine it is so. The picture and the postcards – tucked away - are the tangible pieces of evidence that he existed in my life. But the image of his dark, tender eyes fixated on me, and the memory of his smooth kisses and sweet caresses one magical September eve are my favorite mementos of the boy from Quebec. March 13, 2021 For Malabika Ray Choudhury's "I Remember" Poetry Contest Now for John Hamilton's Your Best Free Verse So Far This Year Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/28/2021 6:43:00 AM
Melancholic - Really Poetic.
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Date: 4/27/2021 8:40:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on great storytelling, usually I like free verse more poetic and less prose, but, this was very compelling!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/27/2021 2:57:00 PM
I read many of the winning entries and saw a few that seemed like my style as well. I think I will never get free verse!! anyway thanks for the win at least!!
Date: 4/26/2021 11:04:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 3/18/2021 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A magical story/write with your magical September, picture and postcards. Great memories are the best. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 3/18/2021 1:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea . What a wonderful poem you penned.
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Date: 3/17/2021 8:45:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/17/2021 4:51:00 PM
A beautiful reminiscent poem Andrea, that spark a first love left smoulders in the chambers of one's heart. Congratulations on your top of the list win ~ Belle
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Date: 3/17/2021 3:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea - loved your poem ~ Mala
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Date: 3/17/2021 12:36:00 PM
Wow! This is exquisite, poignant writing. I wonder whatever happened to that "boy from Quebec?" Nice work and very deserving of a first place finish, Andrea.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/17/2021 1:30:00 PM
I wish I knew myself, L. I tried FB but all I recall is his name but too many have his name: Guy Loranger and I think he was born maybe in '52 because he was a November baby and when I just turned 17 in September, he was 19, but probably going on 20!
Date: 3/17/2021 11:53:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/17/2021 1:31:00 PM
thanks, my friend. I had fun writing it.
Date: 3/15/2021 6:40:00 AM
Hi Andrea, What a good entry for the contest theme. It's sad yet very romantic—many long to have such an encounter. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/14/2021 8:34:00 PM
There is a beautiful, vivid evocation of pure romance! Well written! Andrea.
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Date: 3/14/2021 4:57:00 PM
Very powerful, Andrea. The imagery is great, as is the emotion. I like the lines- The pictures and postcards tucked away/are tangible piece of evidence that he existed in my life. Mike
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Date: 3/14/2021 2:00:00 PM
Andrea, the story is similar to "Bridges of Madison County" and I hope the boy from Quebec is enjoying a good life now. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn (Soup Mail)
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Date: 3/14/2021 5:32:00 AM
Rejoicing in memories, Andrea. Some dreams are so special--as this one is.
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Date: 3/14/2021 4:03:00 AM
Beautiful memories to cherish... Andrea... so romantic... Best wishes in the contest... Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 3/14/2021 1:46:00 AM
That's so lovely to recall such memories in a cute way... Beautifully did, Andrea... Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 3/14/2021 12:24:00 AM
Ah that boy from Quebec. You could have been a Canadian by now. Not to be. Love lost and can only be recaptured in memories. Lovely romantic poem.
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Date: 3/13/2021 9:08:00 PM
Love your romantic poem. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/13/2021 6:47:00 PM
Andrea, Pure passion at a price. Very nice scrapbook dark-eyed memories from a kind heart. Perhaps there is a Buick out there that remembers two lover's embraced in a moment of bliss, and a kiss. -Richard
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