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More Than the Eye Can See

Clinging at the boundary of the universe; if it can be called a boundary at all, is an androgynous infinity whose murmurous echo ripples the silence of ancient marble corridors. The once sonorous booming, a mere relic, yet etched still in the arcane runes of forgotten civilizations; encoded, lies dazzling truth, gorgeous and universal, appreciated no more beyond mysticism or the surreal. Yet it clings, desperate to exist Where no eye shall behold, and none shall find, …save the listeners. 4/30/16 Contest Submission: More Than The Eye Can See Hosted By: Mystic Rose

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Date: 8/17/2016 3:44:00 PM
Enjoy your use of words. I think you had fun writing this one.
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Date: 5/8/2016 2:52:00 PM
Oh, I do love this "...silence of ancient marble corridors", makes me wonder who had walked them before, and what had their thoughts been. I'm trying not to think of "the listeners".:) Keep well, this is an amazing write! Mikki
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Date: 5/4/2016 3:47:00 PM
Pretty damn cosmic! Hope you do well in the contest! Peace &Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/4/2016 5:29:00 PM
Thank you sir, I appreciate the encouragement. -G
Date: 5/4/2016 11:59:00 AM
group of nice thoughts to create a good poem......wow
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Date: 5/4/2016 5:25:00 PM
Thanks, Manu. I appreciate that you took the time to comment. -G
Date: 5/4/2016 3:18:00 AM
Lovely and lovely...well done mate!
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Date: 5/4/2016 5:25:00 PM
Thank you, sir.
Date: 5/4/2016 12:56:00 AM
Ooops not used to this site but this does deserve a top rating
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Date: 5/4/2016 12:54:00 AM
Very lovely...my mind thought of space debris and the sounds we cannot hear
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Date: 5/4/2016 5:25:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts, I really appreciate the feedback. -G
Date: 5/3/2016 12:35:00 PM
a delightful, atmospheric piece that transcends ordinary sense of sight, graham... this is ethereal!..huggs
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Date: 5/4/2016 5:21:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by and commenting, Nette. I appreciate the feedback. -G
Date: 5/2/2016 7:58:00 AM
Those who see with their ears are capable of witnessing the unseen colours. I enjoyed this piece very much.
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Date: 5/2/2016 6:27:00 PM
Beautiful interpretation Richard. Thank you for reading and commenting. -G
Date: 5/2/2016 5:34:00 AM
ADDING THIS TO MY FAV LIST . It compels the mind to think deep and race toward a great truth. That echo lives eternally my friend and sadly we ran away from it ..A7
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Date: 5/2/2016 6:27:00 PM
Hi Robert, thank you for dropping in. I am glad you enjoyed it. -G
Date: 5/1/2016 8:52:00 PM
Oh my gosh what you did with those words, in such a succinct manner. Outstanding!
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Date: 5/2/2016 6:25:00 PM
Succinct is not usually my forte; I think I'm far more likely to be accused of being loquacious. Nevertheless, I appreciate you taking the time to stop by, read and comment. =) -G
Date: 4/30/2016 9:07:00 PM
A profound poem laden with potential words of poetry....very good......
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Date: 5/2/2016 6:24:00 PM
Thank you sir, I am glad you can appreciate it. -G

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