More Than the Blues

Sir Winston Churchill called it "his black dog"
It plagued him off and on throughout his life
And I have also been caught up in this cog
A storm of heartache,misery and strife

The blackness sinks you fast and lasts so long
At times it seems just breathing is a chore
Forgotten are the words to every song
Painted skies are beautiful no more

The mystery is you don't know how it came
Or why you're chosen to be burdened so
Aflame with guilt or frozen out with shame
Permeates and deals a deathly blow

Thinking you're the only one so battered
Solitary vision fills your mind
Finding all your hopes and dreams are shattered
Caring not the world's left you behind

One day you begin to reappear
Start the climb out of the dark abyss
Wake up once again,swallow your fear
Wondering why it always comes to this

That you should go through periods of pain
Stretches of vacuity and sorrow
At long last fight your way out of the rain
Look ahead now to a free tomorrow



written February 28th,2011

for contest "Hey....Mr. Editor"
sponsored by John Heck
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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George   Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 9:00 AM
Sensational writing, dear Deb. Many congrata's on yoru WIN. Lainie
George   Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 8:58 AM
Sensational writing, dear Deb. Many congrata's on yoru WIN. Lainie
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 11:50 PM
I didnt' know this about Churchill, Deb. my hubbie lives with it daily. NO fun. Congrats on your outstanding writing. Luv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in John Heck's "Hey...Mr. Editor" contest Deb. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 5:08 AM
Super congrats Deb on your wonderful win with this stirring piece!-- I can relate to this on some level, I really like how you ended this with so much hope--- nikko :)
Freeman Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 6:12 PM
Good to see you in the top ten Deb. Congratulations on your sixth place honored win. Agape, Moses
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March 6, 2011 at 3:16 PM
Nice work, Deb. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 1:47 PM
depression? if so or anxiety, yes it's so hard to remember when DOWN that UP is most probably a day or so away if you can hold on! Excellent write! Congrad's on your fine win! Light & love
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Congrats Deb on your stupendous win in John's contest with this amazing write and entry luv.. enjoy another top ten win ...
Tacito Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 8:35 AM
Fantastic flow here, Deb!
Pettit Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 10:09 PM
Excellent rhyming here, Deb. John should like this entry for the contest.
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