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More Than Dinner Was Served

Knock knock as she opens her front door
It's her beau whom now stands before
With a bouquet of flowers
All different colors
For his girl whom he loves and adores

After some chatting about this and that
What a scoff I'm gonna get fat
With a glass of white wine
I know I'll be fine
I think I've also eaten the place mat

Now recovered from our earlier meal
The music starts this songs our appeal
Well boy can she dance
Her beauties my trance
So delightful in glide genteel

It's now close to the end of our night
Knowing something is beautifully right
With a kiss on her lips
Her dress gracefully slips
Like a flash our engines ignite

Now sprawled out on her King sized bed
You can guess so much has been said
Two torsos have shared
So naked birth bared
Unification continues when wed 




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Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Funom Makama Date: 7/9/2015 7:04:00 AM This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression. Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 7/9/2015 1:40:00 PM Glad you liked it Funom, a little humor goes along way, smiles, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/19/2015 10:34:00 AM HUGE James, you bring me back to that day where we exchange some limericks in the phone while chatting.. =) What I love about this strings are: 1) the one who wrote it hehehe :D =); 2) the increasing degree of emotions you easily portrayed: from like courting, to getting to know, dates, being intimate to getting married; 3) fun, lively, romantic, i can feel the happiness as you the writer wants to deliver, 4) witty; 5) i love best on technical rules of the form 1st/3rd/4th 6) imagery~hugs, Olive Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/19/2015 7:41:00 PM Lets do it so soon... =) letz get our pen moving! James Fraser Date: 6/19/2015 1:09:00 PM Thank you little one, we have more forms to learn and share as our months and years progress. We really need to do another collab using short forms your mentioned a few days ago ~hugs~your Huge James~xxxx

Paul Callus Date: 6/18/2015 3:50:00 PM A very entertaining string of Limericks, James! A mixture of fun and reality! // Must congratulate you on this lovely and inspiring avatar:) All the best. // paul Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 6/18/2015 4:01:00 PM Thank you kindly Paul for your always kind words. Yes, it's an avatar image that makes me smile daily. Have a lovely Friday/Weekend, kind regards, James...

Jan Allison Date: 6/18/2015 1:12:00 AM What a beautiful romantic and sensual string of limericks James:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 6/18/2015 3:32:00 PM Thank you Jan, it was good fun writing ~ ;-) hugs // James xx

Diane Christian Date: 6/18/2015 12:47:00 AM Good write it sounds romantic and sweet song of love. Thank you for your kind comments on my acoustic poem Clean Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 6/18/2015 3:27:00 PM Thank you Diane, a little loving fun in Limericks ~ James :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/17/2015 10:48:00 PM ahhhh, it is a romantic set!!! There was one stanza that was really quite perfectly metered. that next to last one, and I loved the content of it as well! Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 6/18/2015 3:12:00 PM Hiya Andrea, lovely moments shared to Limerick form from an imaginative mind, smiles, James :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/17/2015 10:43:00 PM hey, who is the girl in the picture with you? well, let me read this poem now! Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 6/18/2015 3:18:00 PM Hi Andrea, it's someone who means a lot to me :-) // James xx