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More Than Dinner Was Served

Knock knock as she opens her front door It's her beau whom now stands before With a bouquet of flowers All different colors For his girl whom he loves and adores After some chatting about this and that What a scoff I'm gonna get fat With a glass of white wine I know I'll be fine I think I've also eaten the place mat Now recovered from our earlier meal The music starts this songs our appeal Well boy can she dance Her beauties my trance So delightful in glide genteel It's now close to the end of our night Knowing something is beautifully right With a kiss on her lips Her dress gracefully slips Like a flash our engines ignite Now sprawled out on her King sized bed You can guess so much has been said Two torsos have shared So naked birth bared Unification continues when wed .

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/9/2015 7:04:00 AM

This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

James Fraser
Date: 7/9/2015 1:40:00 PM

Glad you liked it Funom, a little humor goes along way, smiles, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/19/2015 10:34:00 AM

HUGE James, you bring me back to that day where we exchange some limericks in the phone while chatting.. =) What I love about this strings are: 1) the one who wrote it hehehe :D =); 2) the increasing degree of emotions you easily portrayed: from like courting, to getting to know, dates, being intimate to getting married; 3) fun, lively, romantic, i can feel the happiness as you the writer wants to deliver, 4) witty; 5) i love best on technical rules of the form 1st/3rd/4th 6) imagery~hugs, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/19/2015 7:41:00 PM

Lets do it so soon... =) letz get our pen moving!

James Fraser
Date: 6/19/2015 1:09:00 PM

Thank you little one, we have more forms to learn and share as our months and years progress. We really need to do another collab using short forms your mentioned a few days ago ~hugs~your Huge James~xxxx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/18/2015 3:50:00 PM

A very entertaining string of Limericks, James! A mixture of fun and reality! // Must congratulate you on this lovely and inspiring avatar:) All the best. // paul

James Fraser
Date: 6/18/2015 4:01:00 PM

Thank you kindly Paul for your always kind words. Yes, it's an avatar image that makes me smile daily. Have a lovely Friday/Weekend, kind regards, James...

Jan Allison

Date: 6/18/2015 1:12:00 AM

What a beautiful romantic and sensual string of limericks James:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 6/18/2015 3:32:00 PM

Thank you Jan, it was good fun writing ~ ;-) hugs // James xx

Diane Christian

Date: 6/18/2015 12:47:00 AM

Good write it sounds romantic and sweet song of love. Thank you for your kind comments on my acoustic poem Clean

James Fraser
Date: 6/18/2015 3:27:00 PM

Thank you Diane, a little loving fun in Limericks ~ James :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2015 10:48:00 PM

ahhhh, it is a romantic set!!! There was one stanza that was really quite perfectly metered. that next to last one, and I loved the content of it as well!

James Fraser
Date: 6/18/2015 3:12:00 PM

Hiya Andrea, lovely moments shared to Limerick form from an imaginative mind, smiles, James :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2015 10:43:00 PM

hey, who is the girl in the picture with you? well, let me read this poem now!

James Fraser
Date: 6/18/2015 3:18:00 PM

Hi Andrea, it's someone who means a lot to me :-) // James xx