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More Than An Instant

I waited within the seconds for you to return Funny how long a second can be One never realizes it until you're left in wait The anticipation of half a second to a second Time ..... what is it really? A measure of what? Measuring mere intervals of each day What if your wait is longer? More than an instant but less than a second To live in wait of a continuum of instances that feel like lifetimes My days are made up of .... continuous instances Thousands of seconds that feel like hours Every minute it's as if I lived sixty lifetimes and died To be reborn again in the next minute.... This is what my days feel like missing you But I would live and die a million more Just to see you again

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Date: 9/20/2019 3:41:00 PM
The ending makes you realize that it was all worth it, and brought a smile to my face.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/20/2019 5:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Caren! Your visit is much appreciated!;)
Date: 9/20/2019 10:03:00 AM
I'm not sure exactly what time is to be honest with you, who exactly came up with this measurement but one thing I do know is I will always make time to read your wonderful poetry. Very deep thoughts here Brenda. I can feel the longing and heart ache in this.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/20/2019 11:20:00 AM
Yea I never know what time it is unless I'm waiting for someone then I can tell you down to the second! Thanks Chris!;)
Date: 9/20/2019 9:42:00 AM
This is an impressive write Brenda... thoughts that occur to me as well, often, well done!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/20/2019 11:19:00 AM
Thank you John I appreciate your encouraging comment!;)
Date: 9/20/2019 9:18:00 AM
a second can seem like an eternity at times, or fly by with hours and days...love this one...your muse has been showing lots of emotions these days....great write! hugs
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/20/2019 11:18:00 AM
Lol my muse is so very fickle! Haha! She never wants to write about what I want to! Always wears her heart on her sleeve! Thank you so much Sandy!;)

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