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More Than A Soft Toy

Written: September 04, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Natasha L Scragg ********* She held a blanket, such a breath— soft, flexible, and incarnadine. Not just fabric, but a cherished friend who coruscated in the empyrean of her private dusk. To others, it was just a childhood comfort— a trite trope of childhood ilk. But to her, it was a jussive voice, a cognate spirit, a consanguineous echo of all she dared not say aloud. She whispered in xenoglossia to its folds, dressed it in pavonine dreams, and understood its silence as a balm for dyspnea and dread. It released her from the maelstrom of parental tohubohu, from the paucity of understanding In a world too careless to listen. Even now, her adult self acknowledges its glamor— a palimpsest of nepenthe and pertinacity. She knows it was never alive, never truly aware. But what does that matter? The psyche is a hive of need, and comfort is no flapdoodle. Whether a toy, a blanket, or an imaginary friend, These are obstacles we overcome to reach meliorism. And if the child within still clutches that scantling of solace, let her. In that mix of truth and delusions. dwells the most astounding type of therapy.
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Goldsmith Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 11:22 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your great "More Than A Soft Toy" write again. Hope you are OK... Have a fun day with your win as you go writing away..........
Hind Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 4:43 PM
This is therapeutic, Sotto - what you could write using a blanket as a metaphor
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2025 at 6:53 AM
- "The psyche is a hive of need, and comfort is no flapdoodle" ... the psyche is our thoughts and feelings... alive or not... it gave her comfort, security and closeness - Lovely poem, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 1:13 PM
I enjoyed reading your great "More Than A Soft Toy" write. I loved my stuffed animals but many do love their blanket.  Love your line, "Whether a toy, a blanket, or an imaginary friend," kids love them all. Hooray!!!  "Good Luck" We both did this one.  Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..............
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September 4, 2025 at 5:49 PM
I sincerely appreciated the insight and depth of your poem, dear Sotto, all culminating with "in that mix of truth and delusions dwells the most astounding type of therapy." Your poem spoke to me. Thank you for sharing your poetic gift. Texas hugs, Sara
Rolland Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 3:31 PM
this is quite musical poetry, with great assonance, i love very much the messages you deliver, they are helpful my friend, thank you so much
Narain Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 11:37 AM
Excellent poem with all the poetic wisdom.
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September 4, 2025 at 5:30 AM
Dear Dr Sotto, you are a master of vocabulary, a great expose of emotions and a psychologist. Brilliant poem on a fond child hugging a stuffed toy. Best for a win..
George Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 4:53 AM
Some children are very fond of blankets. I remember my niece, when she was young, would go to sleep, not clutching a toy, but holding the tip of a blanket which she used to curl in her hands and occasionally smell. Your poem as ever, is vibrant with a rare display of words, most of which I have to search in google to find their meanings. "And if the child within still clutches that scantling of solace, let her. In that mix of truth and delusions. dwells the most astounding type of therapy." Even after growing up, some hold on to this habit. Let them, if it gives them a kind of solace. Great poem.
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