More of a Women

He loves her they have history. We just met so he just loves the thought of me. What can I 
do to make him see I'm more of a women then she'll ever be. I'll rub his back and even his 
feet, run his bath water, cook him something to eat. She deceives him lies, cheats and 
complains about the littlest things. She'll never be the women he wants her to be. She'll 
never be that women because she'll never be me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 18, 2009 at 11:44 AM
made an impact on this poem very well said............kate
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October 5, 2009 at 9:08 AM
I am sure I missed so many amazing poems this past weekend. I enjoyed reading yours today Renee. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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October 4, 2009 at 1:09 PM
Sad topic here. Love gone bad. Keep writing. Sara
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