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More Than Music You You You are so pretty Everything I need You’ve helped fill my empty The star in my night sky The dream I am living My start and my finish I’ve loved you from the beginning Every glance Every laugh The song in my heart You’re more than music God created a work of art You You You are so pretty Everything I need You’ve helped fill my empty The breath I need Your scent makes me giddy The calm of the country My escape from the city Years feel like moments I’m lost in forever I was in search of magic Your love is my treasure Your soul is a blossom It blooms in all seasons Beyond the depth of an ocean I love you darling for so many reasons Yes you You You are so pretty Everything I need You’ve helped fill my empty. Dedicated to the most beautiful person I have ever known. As Edward Sheeran says “You’ll never grow old, your soul is evergreen.” The beautiful in you shines from the inside out.

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Lyric Man

Date: 5/16/2025 7:51:00 PM

Lovely dedication and I see upon my return your pen still captivates!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/16/2025 8:59:00 PM

Much appreciated.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/5/2025 9:19:00 AM

I'm glad your soul is nurtured by your forever love. What a dedication!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/16/2025 8:59:00 PM

Thanks Eileen.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/15/2025 9:10:00 PM

Hi, there, long time no read, huh? I did not get to you as soon as I planned to (rarely do I stay on task as intended on Soup.) Your brevity, alliteration and feel made me high, oh what a feeling. I love how you love your wife, reminds me of how in love I am with My Tim. So good to see you again. I'll be back, promise ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/16/2025 5:26:00 AM

Taos for your lovely commen

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/14/2025 12:01:00 PM

Dear Richard, Your heartfelt words in touched me deeply. I just loved the way you've captured the essence of love and admiration is truly beautiful. I think your verses are a true picture of a love that transcends the ordinary, especially comparing your wife to the stars, dreams, and the very breath you need. She must have been excited to read! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2025 1:04:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words.

Tom Woody

Date: 3/9/2025 4:52:00 PM

Dedicated to da wife? Nice. Do you remember Lyric man? This could easily be one of his. Just passed 31 years with my gal in December

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/16/2025 5:31:00 AM

So sorry, I miss read your comment. When you asked if I remembered Lyric Man and added “just passed” I didn’t realize you were referring to your relationship of 31 years.

Tom Woody
Date: 3/10/2025 7:18:00 AM

Oh really? I hadn't heard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/10/2025 7:04:00 AM

In April we’ll have been together for 33 years. Sorry to hear Lyric Man has passed. Thanks for the visit.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/4/2025 7:10:00 AM

Lovely poem to an often rare find, the perfect match. I love the romantic words and the flowing rhyme. Companionship is wonderful when two minds are alike.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2025 6:16:00 AM

Thanks Hilda. ;0)