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This is a competition A poem written to beat you It is weaponised I am weaponised My judgement of you an attack on me I don’t know the rules or understand the rules I recognise that feeling though rising again to meet me Another chance another chance to break me I don’t know the rules or understand the rules the voice the rhythm the meter But I understand you better now I know you are brave Braver Braver than me

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/1/2024 2:58:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/25/2021 9:02:00 AM

We are all brave in our own way, nicely written piece dear poet, have a great day :)