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Mordacious the Mean

Like a cocked cartridge drawn back in her wizened and mordacious sneer she let fly upon him such an elicit horde he was left to loiter shackled a trifle ............in her dust 5/7/2017 Written for a contest using the following words 1. CARTRIDGE 2. ELICIT 3. MORDACIOUS 4. HORDE 5. SHACKLED 6. TRIFLE 7. WIZENED 8. LOITER

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Date: 4/9/2017 1:32:00 PM
Really good use of the words, thanks for the entry congrats on a fine placement!
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Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 4/11/2017 12:05:00 PM
Thank you John! This contest was a lot of fun!
Date: 4/9/2017 2:18:00 AM
I liked this one, especially the title! Congrats on a fine win!
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Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 4/11/2017 12:06:00 PM
Thank you John! Fun contest for sure!
Date: 4/7/2017 11:29:00 AM
Blimey. I wouldn't want to upset her. I bet that mordacious sneer really stings the old self esteem. Nice sharpand witty poem.
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Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 4/7/2017 11:48:00 AM
LOL :) Thank you I am actually pretty nice- guess she is my alter ego "elicited" by the contest ;)

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