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Moore Tornado

Everyone experiences a time in their life when it seems like the light has given away to darkness. Times when hope becomes the substance of memory leaving nothing but overwhelming loss Times when sadness creeps in and consumes what remains – if much remains at all Until we stand alone in the deep blackness of the pain absorbed from the fall Then when it seems that this darkness – this unwelcome guest Never plans to leave and will never give us rest It has taken away our loved ones – it has taken our best It has broken the fragile heart beneath this bruised chest It has left me with still fresh memories that tear away at my mind It has taken away my future and left me behind Wondering if this was part of God’s ‘perfect’ design Were they branches that deserved to be cut from the vine? Yet, it is only when the darkness passes that I could finally see That you were always standing directly behind me I was so blinded and lost in an abyss of blackness and loss That I was unaware that I had wandered into the shadow of the cross Though I still weep when I look around still hoping to see their face I am comforted in knowing they are now under your perfect grace So, I thank you dear Father for allowing me to see That you didn’t take them away – you set them free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/3/2016 10:08:00 PM
Tommie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/30/2016 12:30:00 PM
Hi Tommie, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.......with love.
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Date: 4/30/2016 5:32:00 AM
Tommie, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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