Moony River

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Just poetry, for its sake!

m o o n y river, eyes that e b b and f l o w. h o p s c o t c h stones, leaping u n d e r t o w s. moonbow s t r e t c h e d o u t like a canvas. wee-er men, digging gold l e s s f a s t. golden fireflies, s l o w l y flapping, g l o w. this little town, a trinket, time goes s l o w.

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 6/8/2025 10:45:00 AM

Have you been Strandized? I skipped the 2 above this poem because my head somewhat hurts and I just didn't have it in me to puzzle them out. Forgive me. Like my pal, Gershon says, 'This works' It was a write I could 'frolic' through. CayCay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2025 11:15:00 AM

LOL…Strandized! I’m assuming Brian. I’m glad you had fun frolicking through this one! It is fun to get playful! ~ Kim

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/7/2025 9:45:00 PM

Every line works for me. Love the images and the scene portrayed therein. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2025 5:29:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon! Just a little whimsy :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/7/2025 10:36:00 AM

WOW!!! What a creative write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a lovely/fun day writing away...............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 11:19:00 AM

Thank you so much! You are the sweetest of the sweet!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/7/2025 10:03:00 AM

Good on you for writing and posting REAL poetry Kim, i spend less and less time on the site now am fed up of AI generated stuff posted in vast quantities and nothing gets done. I've giving up reporting it to admin - no wonder folk leave the site:-( hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/7/2025 9:46:00 PM

Jan, the whole PS site seems to be going down the drain rapidly these days. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 11:22:00 AM

So sorry, Jan! I suspect sometimes but don’t know. I just enjoy sharing and enjoy many writes. The heart should be in it. I trust implicitly some writers. They’ve always been real. I don’t see the point of writing poetry if it is not yours…so silly, thoughtless and for some malicious. ((hugs))