Moonwash

Wisping winds whisk whispered whimsies willows’ way. By the pond, we ponder potent possibilities posed by pollinated passions. As we divine dallying delights depicting developing days, Moonbeams mobilize to mob us on the mossy mound.

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Warren Doll

Date: 8/3/2018 9:55:00 PM

Awesome alliteration. Bernard.

Bernard Chan
Date: 8/5/2018 4:13:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Warren.

Maria Williams

Date: 2/4/2018 6:15:00 AM

A tongue twisting alliteration sprinkled with subtle sensuality. Nicely done Bernard. Loved it...Maria

Bernard Chan
Date: 2/4/2018 7:41:00 AM

Thank you, Maria. Glad you liked it! :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/1/2018 7:11:00 PM

Wow! Your potent pen is over the moon with this poem Bernard! Amazing alliteration, luscious imagery and a fantastic title make for simply stunning results. Each line is poetic bliss, especially line 1. Superb and sparkling imaginative poetry my friend. Love it! Warmest wishes ~Susan

Bernard Chan
Date: 2/1/2018 9:46:00 PM

Thank you, Susan! You're a dear friend :)