Moonwash

Wisping winds whisk whispered whimsies willows’ way. 
By the pond, we ponder potent possibilities posed by pollinated passions. 
As we divine dallying delights depicting developing days, 
Moonbeams mobilize to mob us on the mossy mound.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Doll Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Awesome alliteration. Bernard.
Chan Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 4:13 AM
Thanks a lot, Warren.
Williams Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 6:15 AM
A tongue twisting alliteration sprinkled with subtle sensuality. Nicely done Bernard. Loved it...Maria
Chan Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Thank you, Maria. Glad you liked it! :)
Ashley Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 7:11 PM
Wow! Your potent pen is over the moon with this poem Bernard! Amazing alliteration, luscious imagery and a fantastic title make for simply stunning results. Each line is poetic bliss, especially line 1. Superb and sparkling imaginative poetry my friend. Love it! Warmest wishes ~Susan
Chan Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 9:46 PM
Thank you, Susan! You're a dear friend :)
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