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Moonwalk With Me

Glide and slide and let it rest we're all just guessing doing our best. Leave it be dance your way on this glorious journey. Live and let live loving all who pass for it won't matter when the sand fills the glass. Just like you, I wish I knew all about Great Mystery but, I haven't a clue. Everyone wonders what will there be or will there be a be but this dance is so grand I don't know if I can stand to know, so ... come moonwalk with me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/22/2009 4:21:00 PM
love the poem.... it paints a vivid picture in my mind..... makes me really want to go skating on the moon. > Hosea.... PS.> thanks for the comment. :)
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Date: 8/8/2009 12:55:00 AM
Hi Sue, your title caught my eye, and it sure is a wonderful poem with such a great message :) It sure would be lovely to be able to moonwalk...btw thank you so much for your warm welcome & lovely comments on my writes--I even learned something new about senryu--I'll make sure to check out the resources here..thank you again :) -nikko :)
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Date: 8/7/2009 12:36:00 PM
I like the interesting perspective in this one. The last stanza is my favorite, leaving the reader with something to ponder. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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Date: 8/7/2009 8:33:00 AM
Yes we do all wonder....some seem to be more sure than others....but I do wonder.....and like you, don't know if I can stand to know. So.........yes....I will moonwalk with you!! (ps...answering your comment on my poem....yes...the deer really did get into my garden :( ....however....we do love having deer around so that's the price we pay!!!
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Date: 8/7/2009 8:25:00 AM
I am gliding through this life with you my friend.. I have my special dancing shoes on and I am moving to the beat.
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Date: 8/7/2009 7:44:00 AM
Another day we are blessed to be here reading and writing poetry. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today Sue. Thank you my friend for your most welcome comments. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2009 5:17:00 AM
Sue I hope you put this on a plaque and hang it up it is beautiful also could see it in a book too thanks for your help on spell and I used spell chech in soup lol keep up the great work
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Date: 8/7/2009 1:13:00 AM
Lovely poem Sue>>James
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Date: 8/6/2009 8:47:00 PM
dreamy, filled with hope, honest words from a great poet! jim
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