Wilma Neels Poet Diminished Hexaverse

'moonstruck'

Just like gunpowder
prolong exposure
not advisable
to walk on the moon
a dream for many

uncertainty
about the truth
not an issue
walk on the moon
ultimate 
aim in life
to explore

unearth
unknown
realms

I 
somehow
prefer

Not walking 
on the moon
It might spoil
my fantasy 
of a full moon
two hearts beating
echoing love

Romance disappears
when dust show its face
cuddling up with you
looking at the moon 
I remain starstruck

©01042012

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Joe Maverick April 9, 2012 at 7:20 PM Well this is a lovley write about the magical moonlight Wilma..) hope your Easter was good Joe..)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 6, 2012 at 12:37 PM wishing u happy easter blessings Wilma luv.. hope u will join in the fun of my new contest too and "bite" another poet with your entry .. luv..

Carolyn Devonshire April 6, 2012 at 11:54 AM You said it, Wilma. I have no desire to explore unknown realms and spoil my fantasy (for me, the man in the moon). Excellent form and I love hat last line! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Elizabeth Wesley April 6, 2012 at 11:35 AM I agree Wilma, much better to share romance looking at it than getting there. Great entry for the contest and glad for your win! Luv, Lizzie

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders April 4, 2012 at 9:48 PM Congrats on your win, Wilma! A beautiful and creative write. Blessings, Rhonda

Charmaine Chircop April 4, 2012 at 8:06 AM Very very beautiful moon poem :)... La la luna la luna... you got me singing now :)

Phyllis Babcock April 3, 2012 at 10:14 AM Congrats on your win. Enjoyed reading your poem today. love phyl

Carol Sunshine Brown April 3, 2012 at 5:19 AM Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 2, 2012 at 9:04 PM This is another different take on the theme, Missy! I really enjoyed your unique imagery here-- on gunpowder and I like the different mindset you put in here! Yeah, dust can be a romance killer, ei? I hope you're having a good week up ahead! I still owe you mail :(!! Mwahugs!! :D

Joyce Johnson April 2, 2012 at 6:14 PM Yes indeed they have shown us too much. Better to dream. Congratulations Wilma. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 2, 2012 at 4:40 PM congrats Wilma on winning an HM for this exciting entry in DH form.. an awesome wrie as always luv..

David Williams April 2, 2012 at 1:07 AM Wilma ooh very good, if for the contest good luck, thanks for your comments and I do hope you will/have entered my contest..David

Jslambert Mister Roboto April 1, 2012 at 7:44 PM keep on writing about the Favorite subject of mine....so I can be Ready and Greedy along your Poet Tree creativity! Wilma NeeeeL-tY lol