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Just like gunpowder prolong exposure not advisable to walk on the moon a dream for many uncertainty about the truth not an issue walk on the moon ultimate aim in life to explore unearth unknown realms I somehow prefer Not walking on the moon It might spoil my fantasy of a full moon two hearts beating echoing love Romance disappears when dust show its face cuddling up with you looking at the moon I remain starstruck ©01042012

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Date: 4/9/2012 7:20:00 PM
Well this is a lovley write about the magical moonlight Wilma..) hope your Easter was good Joe..)
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Date: 4/6/2012 12:37:00 PM
wishing u happy easter blessings Wilma luv.. hope u will join in the fun of my new contest too and "bite" another poet with your entry .. luv..
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Date: 4/6/2012 11:54:00 AM
You said it, Wilma. I have no desire to explore unknown realms and spoil my fantasy (for me, the man in the moon). Excellent form and I love hat last line! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/6/2012 11:35:00 AM
I agree Wilma, much better to share romance looking at it than getting there. Great entry for the contest and glad for your win! Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 4/5/2012 7:25:00 PM
congrads on your win!
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Date: 4/4/2012 9:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Wilma! A beautiful and creative write. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/4/2012 8:06:00 AM
Very very beautiful moon poem :)... La la luna la luna... you got me singing now :)
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Date: 4/3/2012 10:14:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Enjoyed reading your poem today. love phyl
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Date: 4/3/2012 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/2/2012 9:04:00 PM
This is another different take on the theme, Missy! I really enjoyed your unique imagery here-- on gunpowder and I like the different mindset you put in here! Yeah, dust can be a romance killer, ei? I hope you're having a good week up ahead! I still owe you mail :(!! Mwahugs!! :D
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Date: 4/2/2012 6:14:00 PM
Yes indeed they have shown us too much. Better to dream. Congratulations Wilma. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/2/2012 4:40:00 PM
congrats Wilma on winning an HM for this exciting entry in DH form.. an awesome wrie as always luv..
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Date: 4/2/2012 1:07:00 AM
Wilma ooh very good, if for the contest good luck, thanks for your comments and I do hope you will/have entered my contest..David
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Date: 4/1/2012 7:44:00 PM
keep on writing about the Favorite subject of mine....so I can be Ready and Greedy along your Poet Tree creativity! Wilma NeeeeL-tY lol
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