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contest Moonstone or Stardust sponsor Ink Empres

the undulating current of love ripples through our hearts beneath a black sky draped in a glittering mass mingling with moon glows painting an abundance of light, trapped in our eyes where a talisman moonstone enters our souls like a translucent gemstone of pearly lustre that lifts our lifeblood of internal desire our lips merged in a plush tendril melting into a singular tissue from this lover's web of emotional exuberance and ethereal light within that our hearts inhabit beneath this celestial sky this blissful serene realm draws us closer to a harmonious bond of enchantment born from moonstone melodies and romantic grace

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Date: 11/20/2024 11:44:00 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win! There is so much translucent beauty in each of your romantic lines, like the translucent beauty of the moonstone itself. Blessings!
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Date: 11/13/2024 11:58:00 AM
- Frederic, a pleasure to read your winning poem, congratulations :) - hugs
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Date: 11/13/2024 7:45:00 AM
Dear Frederick, so good to see you write for my contest, you always write so well, in such eloquence , in a way that really resonates, conveying emotions while also painting imagery, which is truly captivating and artistic, and youv done that very well here in such a seamless manner! Absolutely love the way youv used the prompt here! Congratulations on getting placed! Thank you for sharing. Sending you light always
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Date: 11/7/2024 11:23:00 PM
You're so good with romantic writes. Lovely choice of word here... loved the lips merging line.
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Date: 11/7/2024 10:33:00 AM
- What a wonderful and romantic poem, Frederic :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 11/7/2024 11:45:00 AM
thank you dear poet...forgive me I've been away awhile

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