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contest Moonstone or Stardust sponsor Ink Empres

Moonstone Melodies

the undulating current of love
   ripples through our hearts
beneath a black sky draped in a glittering mass
   mingling with moon glows
painting an abundance of light, trapped in our eyes
where a talisman moonstone enters our souls
like a translucent gemstone of pearly lustre
that lifts our lifeblood of internal desire
our lips merged in a plush tendril
melting into a singular tissue
from this lover's web of emotional exuberance
   and ethereal light within
that our hearts inhabit beneath this celestial sky
this blissful serene realm draws us closer
to a harmonious bond of enchantment
born from moonstone melodies and romantic grace
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Kauffman Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 11:44 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win! There is so much translucent beauty in each of your romantic lines, like the translucent beauty of the moonstone itself. Blessings!
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 11:58 AM
- Frederic, a pleasure to read your winning poem, congratulations :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 7:45 AM
Dear Frederick, so good to see you write for my contest, you always write so well, in such eloquence , in a way that really resonates, conveying emotions while also painting imagery, which is truly captivating and artistic, and youv done that very well here in such a seamless manner! Absolutely love the way youv used the prompt here! Congratulations on getting placed! Thank you for sharing. Sending you light always
Manassian Avatar
November 7, 2024 at 11:23 PM
You're so good with romantic writes. Lovely choice of word here... loved the lips merging line.
Andresen Avatar
November 7, 2024 at 10:33 AM
- What a wonderful and romantic poem, Frederic :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Parker Avatar
November 7, 2024 at 11:45 AM
thank you dear poet...forgive me I've been away awhile
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