Moonstone Melodies

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contest Moonstone or Stardust sponsor Ink Empres

the undulating current of love
   ripples through our hearts
beneath a black sky draped in a glittering mass
   mingling with moon glows
painting an abundance of light, trapped in our eyes
where a talisman moonstone enters our souls
like a translucent gemstone of pearly lustre
that lifts our lifeblood of internal desire
our lips merged in a plush tendril
melting into a singular tissue
from this lover's web of emotional exuberance
   and ethereal light within
that our hearts inhabit beneath this celestial sky
this blissful serene realm draws us closer
to a harmonious bond of enchantment
born from moonstone melodies and romantic grace

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/20/2024 11:44:00 AM

Frederic, congratulations on your win! There is so much translucent beauty in each of your romantic lines, like the translucent beauty of the moonstone itself. Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2024 11:58:00 AM

- Frederic, a pleasure to read your winning poem, congratulations :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 11/13/2024 7:45:00 AM

Dear Frederick, so good to see you write for my contest, you always write so well, in such eloquence , in a way that really resonates, conveying emotions while also painting imagery, which is truly captivating and artistic, and youv done that very well here in such a seamless manner! Absolutely love the way youv used the prompt here! Congratulations on getting placed! Thank you for sharing. Sending you light always