Charles Henderson Poet Rhyme

Moonshine

Goin’ north, cross the line
sell a bit of muscadine, homebrew, 
and moonshine

steal my horse, but not my stein
got to have my muscadine, homebrew,
and moonshine

probly shut me up fur nine
fur making, muscadine, homebrew, 
and moonshine

I tolt the law it wont mine
not the muscadine, homebrew,
and moonshine.

It bees sumpthin sooo fine
thet muskidin, hoembrow,,,
an moneshinnnn, (hic)

© Sept 17 2010   Charles Henderson
  H M in Deb's Harvest moon contest

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Sara Kendrick October 4, 2010 at 6:07 AM Congratulations on your win in the Harvest Moon Contest..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown October 4, 2010 at 5:02 AM Congratulations on your win Charles in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Harvest Moon;P". Love, Carol

Audrey Haick October 1, 2010 at 9:22 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest, Charles. Enjoy! Peace, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire September 30, 2010 at 8:23 AM Really like the country flavor you added to this creative poem, Charles. Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich September 29, 2010 at 8:32 PM Loved the originality of this one, Charles and the dialect really give it pizazz! Congralations on the winner circle. LUv, Andrea

Joyce Johnson September 29, 2010 at 8:02 PM Very different and funny take on the moon contest. Congratulations on your hm. Love, Joyce

John Freeman September 29, 2010 at 6:49 PM I made a little of the muscadine wine, Charles, Congratulations on your presentation. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 29, 2010 at 6:05 PM Congrats Charles on your HM in the Harvest Moon contest.. enjoy your special honor tonight for a most wonderful write my friend with luv..

Debbie Guzzi September 21, 2010 at 6:28 AM Hey Charlie! Thanks for the entry, I love dialect, a wee bit of advice, write more...and put a note at the bottom re:muskidin?

Poet Destroyer A September 18, 2010 at 12:30 PM nice one, enjoyed your write..P.D.

Terry Henderson September 18, 2010 at 9:12 AM I like this poem and muscadine brew is fine, I have made my share. Take care...Terry

Dr.Ram Mehta September 18, 2010 at 2:33 AM Enjoyed the lingo though don't know much about it but can understand alright, Charles

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 18, 2010 at 1:43 AM haha enjoyed this moonshine write of yours, Charles, complete with "hic"-- very catchy! wish you the best in the contest :) --nikko :)

Cas Davis September 18, 2010 at 1:25 AM Excellent write! I can practically hear the banjo playin'.