Moonshine

Goin’ north, cross the line
sell a bit of muscadine, homebrew, 
and moonshine

steal my horse, but not my stein
got to have my muscadine, homebrew,
and moonshine

probly shut me up fur nine
fur making, muscadine, homebrew, 
and moonshine

I tolt the law it wont mine
not the muscadine, homebrew,
and moonshine.

It bees sumpthin sooo fine
thet muskidin, hoembrow,,,
an moneshinnnn, (hic)

© Sept 17 2010   Charles Henderson
  H M in Deb's Harvest moon contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/4/2010 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Harvest Moon Contest..Sara
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Date: 10/4/2010 5:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Charles in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Harvest Moon;P". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Charles. Enjoy! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 9/30/2010 8:23:00 AM
Really like the country flavor you added to this creative poem, Charles. Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:32:00 PM
Loved the originality of this one, Charles and the dialect really give it pizazz! Congralations on the winner circle. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:02:00 PM
Very different and funny take on the moon contest. Congratulations on your hm. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/29/2010 6:49:00 PM
I made a little of the muscadine wine, Charles, Congratulations on your presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/29/2010 6:05:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your HM in the Harvest Moon contest.. enjoy your special honor tonight for a most wonderful write my friend with luv..
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Date: 9/21/2010 6:28:00 AM
Hey Charlie! Thanks for the entry, I love dialect, a wee bit of advice, write more...and put a note at the bottom re:muskidin?
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Date: 9/18/2010 12:30:00 PM
nice one, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 9/18/2010 9:12:00 AM
I like this poem and muscadine brew is fine, I have made my share. Take care...Terry
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Date: 9/18/2010 2:33:00 AM
Enjoyed the lingo though don't know much about it but can understand alright, Charles
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Date: 9/18/2010 1:43:00 AM
haha enjoyed this moonshine write of yours, Charles, complete with "hic"-- very catchy! wish you the best in the contest :) --nikko :)
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Date: 9/18/2010 1:25:00 AM
Excellent write! I can practically hear the banjo playin'.
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