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Moonshine

Goin’ north, cross the line sell a bit of muscadine, homebrew, and moonshine steal my horse, but not my stein got to have my muscadine, homebrew, and moonshine probly shut me up fur nine fur making, muscadine, homebrew, and moonshine I tolt the law it wont mine not the muscadine, homebrew, and moonshine. It bees sumpthin sooo fine thet muskidin, hoembrow,,, an moneshinnnn, (hic) © Sept 17 2010 Charles Henderson H M in Deb's Harvest moon contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2010 6:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Harvest Moon Contest..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/4/2010 5:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Charles in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Harvest Moon;P". Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/1/2010 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest, Charles. Enjoy! Peace, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/30/2010 8:23:00 AM

Really like the country flavor you added to this creative poem, Charles. Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2010 8:32:00 PM

Loved the originality of this one, Charles and the dialect really give it pizazz! Congralations on the winner circle. LUv, Andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/29/2010 8:02:00 PM

Very different and funny take on the moon contest. Congratulations on your hm. Love, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 9/29/2010 6:49:00 PM

I made a little of the muscadine wine, Charles, Congratulations on your presentation. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/29/2010 6:05:00 PM

Congrats Charles on your HM in the Harvest Moon contest.. enjoy your special honor tonight for a most wonderful write my friend with luv..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/21/2010 6:28:00 AM

Hey Charlie! Thanks for the entry, I love dialect, a wee bit of advice, write more...and put a note at the bottom re:muskidin?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2010 12:30:00 PM

nice one, enjoyed your write..P.D.

Terry Henderson

Date: 9/18/2010 9:12:00 AM

I like this poem and muscadine brew is fine, I have made my share. Take care...Terry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/18/2010 2:33:00 AM

Enjoyed the lingo though don't know much about it but can understand alright, Charles

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/18/2010 1:43:00 AM

haha enjoyed this moonshine write of yours, Charles, complete with "hic"-- very catchy! wish you the best in the contest :) --nikko :)

Cas Davis

Date: 9/18/2010 1:25:00 AM

Excellent write! I can practically hear the banjo playin'.