Moonshadow

Stratocumulus, Nocturnal anomalies; Cast shadows of doubt.

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Ciara Aiyana Ashley-Garn

Date: 7/17/2009 10:53:00 AM

this is very interesting...it has a very interesting story in and between its lines that has given a deep look into its meaning...i Love it! keep on going because it will take you far and beyond!! Ciara=)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/14/2009 1:49:00 PM

Positively brilliant, James! You light up our nightlife with this write. Love you, Carolyn

Shirin Neshat

Date: 7/7/2009 6:34:00 PM

I like the vision that you give out.

Brian Strand

Date: 7/2/2009 11:55:00 PM

Like L3 Jim.Nice one & thanks for your welcome coments on my blog.Rgds Brian

Sue Mason

Date: 7/2/2009 8:41:00 PM

Have you submitted this to Raul's contest? ... it fits the picture ... smile ... hope you have a safe and fun 4th of July weekend!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/2/2009 5:58:00 PM

perceptive! Light & Love

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/2/2009 11:36:00 AM

Beautiful work and nightly observations...Raul

Diane Christian

Date: 7/2/2009 10:38:00 AM

a great write, thanks for your kind feed back on my poem, we all know eevrything only happens for a season just sad the way somethings work out, God bles you from diane

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/2/2009 8:28:00 AM

thick clouds,heavy rains,questions unanswered,lost in bad weather......Moon reflex--you are smart Jim to write this type of Haiku,this picture you ve painted with many shades of grey is a good shadow of sad emotions,and living in doubt only hope can save us-----did i get the right meaning Jim?you are amazing Jim---------charma

Christopher Higgins

Date: 7/2/2009 7:33:00 AM

I had to get my dictionary to enjoy this top quality haiku...LOL..well written.