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Moon's Visit

Come outside with me watch the sky blend with the sea Clouds blanket the fish; with their silver scales sparkling, they look like tiny stars amongst the mist. Take your hand in mine this type of pressure you don't mind like blossoming flowers; their buds have suppressed, to bell out their beauty and exhale their breath. lay down together on the bed of grass they tickle your back and scratch your legs they are hesitant to be spread; they were in deep conversation every lift of wind was their whispers telling: let us live... feel our skin meet As the robin sings his greet hoping no one answers goodbye to his hello wondering where his mate has gone, cause the day has ended and the night has come. Would you dare look into my eyes? they have no questions and no gleaming lies just pondering visions of your face doing pleasures to mine, a pleasure we will both enjoy if you are not too shy. Embrace me for I am cold I feel your warmth and you feel mine and the both of us have been sublime, may we enjoy the moon's visit, as she hovers above, she is the only one watching us....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/19/2010 2:45:00 AM
Congratulations Jessica, on your placement in John Heck’s “Love is in the Air” contest with this romantic poem. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your poetic light is bright. Lovingly, Dane Ann.
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Date: 1/17/2010 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest Jessica. I can see he had a hard time picking the winners. Some fabulous poetry was entered. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2010 5:41:00 PM
Sweet, Jessica! Congratulations on placing! andrea
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Date: 1/16/2010 9:14:00 AM
Jessica, many congratulations on your win in John's fine contest >> James
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Date: 1/16/2010 1:49:00 AM
Beautiful Poem, Jessica. Congratulations on your win in John Heck's contest. So well deserved. Love, Lainie
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Date: 8/4/2009 9:00:00 AM
Jessica this is such a peaceful poem that is so full of love and romance - wonderful poem - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/4/2009 8:53:00 AM
nice poems jessica they are really good!....shi
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