A colorless sunrise, this moon...tonight. Nothing she has to forget. Nothing to ready for. There behind the swamp's trees. Soon to fall - from rot from age from beetle from beaver from wind. Still, though she rises where all will fall. Her borrowed light brightening my darker, later days.
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